"i hate you my dearest."
a message to my darling enemy,
his kiss recked it all
your torn from me now
and it'll never be right
my soul is now drained of affection.
you've ridden me of emotion
torture me, as once you have
your echo still sounds over and over
and the times we spent replay in my mind
theres no more room for thoughts
its only you now, and you like that.
you know only yourself.
it proves i cannot begin again
these blood stained wrist are my blame
sure it hurts, buh ive felt worse
i told you its you.
a basketcase noone believes.
yet your different.. im not fooled.
oh look that was us..
im ultimately replaceable
just so you know where your place is
you destroyed mine and all i stand for
i deserve to burn in hell.
no wait, you do.
my dearest, my darling,
you have a self shrine
i love you,i hate you.
you destroyed me, please kill me.
i know you want to...dearest.
2007-01-03 22:02:58 · 6 answers · asked by supastr_inc 2 in Social Science ➔ Psychology
a message to my darling enemy,
his kiss recked it all
your torn from me now
and it'll never be right
my soul is now drained of affection.
you've ridden me of emotion
torture me, as once you have
your echo still sounds over and over
and the times we spent replay in my mind
theres no more room for thoughts
its only you now, and you like that.
you know only yourself.
it proves i cannot begin again
these blood stained wrist are my blame
sure it hurts, buh ive felt worse
i told you its you.
a basketcase noone believes.
yet your different.. im not fooled.
oh look that was us..
im ultimately replaceable
just so you know where your place is
you destroyed mine and all i stand for
i deserve to burn in hell.
no wait, you do.
my dearest, my darling,
you have a self shrine
i love you,i hate you.
you destroyed me, please kill me.
i know you want to...dearest.
(this is about my ex best friend, and its reflection on what happened.)
2007-01-03 22:37:29 · update #1
Nothing is Emo anymore. Emo was a sub-genre of what is thought of as "scream-o", or hardcore rock. It died in 1994. How today's "emo" kids dress is nothing like the Emo kids of 94 and previous. Emo has come to be thought of as emotional music because emotional has "EMO" in it. This is similar to how Buddha is often misconceived as the Buddhists' god or Mary as the Catholics' second god of a sort. Emo is NOT whiny. Nor is it slitting your wrists or wearing tight jeans with black band shirts, having a sideswipe with 3 lip piercings and taking pictures at odd angles! Being ignorant, however, is believing this IS what Emo is.
2007-01-03 22:10:21 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it could be considered a wee bit emo!
well, if that's based on real life... i hope you're okay! and someday you're going to find that guy who feels this way for you:
"She's got a smile that would make the most senile
Annoying old man bite his tongue
I'm not done
She's got eyes comparable to sunrise
And it doesn't stop there
Man I swear
She's got porcelain skin of course she's a ten
And now she's even got her own song
But movin' on
She's got the cutest laugh I ever heard
And we can be on the phone for three hours
Not sayin' one word
And I would still cherish every moment
And when I start to build my future she's the main component
Call it dumb call it luck call it love or whatever you call it but
Everywhere I go I keep her picture in my wallet"
so... whatever you're going through will get better. just trust that and hang in there. :)
2007-01-04 06:10:24 · answer #2 · answered by a dear abbey of sorts 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the poem it doesnt have to rhyme to means something. This is send a message of a relationship breakup and how her emotions became crush. Poems are like theruapy hopefully it helps you. Thats creative.I like it.
2007-01-04 06:17:38 · answer #3 · answered by race1983 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Im sick of this EMO label .Personally it gives me the shits.It seems we have a label for everything thesedays.As for your poetry keep it up.Sounds good.Writing helps heal your soul.Wishing you well
2007-01-04 11:56:57 · answer #4 · answered by scar 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Call me what you will but if a poem doesn't rhyme, it just doesn't do it for me. Also I don't mean to be cruel but you need to use a dictionary or spell checker.
2007-01-04 06:08:37 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it!
nice use of oppositions, contrasts: "my darling enemy"; "i love you,i hate you"
"my soul is now drained of affection" - good metaphor
contradictory power feelings
yes love is completely irrational and absurd
2007-01-04 06:12:08 · answer #6 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋