What do you think of these poems?

Question

http://www.poemhunter.com/ana-d/

There are 4 pages of them (61 poems).

Answer 1

Hello!
First I must say I only read ten poems, because I don't have the time. But you seem very serious about writing poems, so ...

At first impression, these poems reflect your life. Nothing wrong with it, it's good to put a lot of feelings in your poems. I would wish a rhyme or two more, but maybe this is too traditional?

I think, you are on a good way regarding composition of a poem in whole. As a suggestion for a step forward: Try to give a reader something what will connect him/her with the poem. Now you only describe your feeling or state of mind or what are you doing. For a reader this is not enough. He/she must find in your poem some interesting point, whether your solution to a problem in its content, or interesting rhymes or hidden symbols or waving of the stressed and unstressed syllables. At some points you are near or even there already. The themes in the poems are interesting/or evergreen so keep going in this direction.

You must keep in mind, that if you want to sell or be heard with your poems, it is a hard work. If you just write for yourself, then I'm being too critic.
It's like Hollywood films, only the toughest see the light and survive only if the audience likes them.
One of many successful lyrics, from Leonard Cohen, for example.

I hope I didn't kill your spirit. Just be brave and keep going!

Answer 2

yeah and what are we supposed to do after the poems are boring

Answer 3

umm i didnt read them just 1 and its greattttttt!!!!!