I'm having trouble with my English 4 Essay, which sentence should i choose? Does anyone have a better way to say in Pass tense.
"While experiencing Paralysis Danny had a dream that would changed his life once and for all”
"While Paralytic Danny had a dream that would change his life once and for all”
2007-01-03 10:33:11 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
How about:
"While he experienced paralysis, Danny had a dream that changed his life once and for all."
That way it's all in past tense.
2007-01-03 10:38:41 · answer #1 · answered by ? 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
"While experiencing Paralysis Danny had a dream that would change_ his life once and for all”
"While Paralytic, Danny had a dream that would change his life once and for all”
Remove the 'd' in the first and add a coma in the 2nd.
2007-01-03 19:05:08 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Danny was a paralytic and he had a dream he would change his life once and for all.
2007-01-03 18:47:55 · answer #3 · answered by lion_tiger182 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
While paralyzed, Danny had a dream that would ultimately change his life forever.
2007-01-03 18:42:04 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
While paralyzed Danny had a dream that would change his life.
2007-01-03 18:39:54 · answer #5 · answered by pat z 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
try
"while paralysed,Danny had a dream that would forever alter his life"
2007-01-03 18:47:56 · answer #6 · answered by mazirudo 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
'While paralyzed Daany had a dream that would changes his life once and for all.'
2007-01-03 18:43:21 · answer #7 · answered by Grapy 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋