Hey guys! what do you think of this song i wrote? Plz be honest, and if you have any suggestions lemme know! It’s a mix of screaming and laughing and singing…..
FAKE
How do I feel?
See my smile?
Covering up so many scars I don’t remember what’s real.
Hear those lies?
Coming out of mouths that leave me with a wounded soul.
But it doesn’t matter now, does it?
I act like I’m fine,
But you would never guess that we’re bleeding.
Lied to, and I fell for them.
Nothing’s okay anymore.
I went thru this once already,
And you promised things would be fine.
So I lived, with an emptyass smile.
Until it happened again and it’s not worth it anymore.
What is the point when we’re all gonna die anyway?
You said you loved me but you forgot to tell me the truth,
And I left out I knew it all along.
Stare into my eyes and tell me….
*Chorus*
You lied to me, I knew it.
We’re all fakes and can’t do it.
2007-01-02 18:01:45 · 4 answers · asked by Argiiii. 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
You said I could but you blew it.
You forgot to tell me the truth,
But that’s okay cuz we’re all fakes anyway.
People look at me and
Know I’m different.
I am not like them because I’m not plastic.
What I saw at first threw me off.
Look at me and don’t lie.
Trust is not real.
Love does not exist.
Hope is only a pigment of never-ending dreams,
That are impossible.
I used to be happy, and we all were.
Because it’s a lie, it’s a lie, it’s a lie, it’s a lie!
But they all think it’s true.
Chorus 1x
So stab me in my heart cuz that’s where the lies sleep at night.
Or shoot me in the head, and let my bloodshot eyes fade.
Just put me to sleep and allow me to rest.
Rest in peace, except peace is only in your imagination.
But they don’t know that.
Chorus 2x
We’re all fakes and we know it, but they’re too plastic to admit. The only thing that’s real is my pain.
2007-01-02 18:02:39 · update #1
wow...girl you got some awesome song. Btw, its amanda and i just thought i would answer and tell you how i felt about your song. Its something so real, and feels so real to me. I love it. And maybe you should like get it published. I need to save this one! Freakin' AWESOME!!!!
2007-01-05 09:13:17 · answer #1 · answered by ♥mcmanda♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh gosh that was really good. Like the person above me said get your rights on that immediatley. That was really good. Don't change it!
2007-01-03 02:09:59 · answer #2 · answered by pixelator 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is so moving. i was in tears by the end of this. you get the copy right on that right somebody might steal it. lol
2007-01-03 02:04:34 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sorry not feeling it more work to be told
2007-01-03 02:14:11 · answer #4 · answered by yukmouth 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋