here is my song. And no one copy it please. Please tell me what you think of it for real.
I dont need a man
I am single
Not looking for a real man
Because i really dont need one
I just mingle with people
That are single like me
Chrous:
I dont need a man
I am fine without you
i get up and dance
And do my thing
I dont need a ring on my finger
I dont need a man
I want a love that is real
You will know if I feel you
I will give you a clue
I am fine without a man
Chrous
Let it go (5x)
I dont need a man
I am fine without you
2007-01-02 06:40:37 · 14 answers · asked by Emily R 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
i did not copy anyhting from the pussycat dolls ok i thought of it myself
2007-01-02 06:56:19 · update #1
Bad: It's a bit redundant, and people generally like songs that rhyme (sorry but it's true.) Now on to the
Good: You get your point across. Your song has potential.
2007-01-02 06:44:54 · answer #1 · answered by Firewheel 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
What a crappy song. That has to be one of the worst songs ever written. Nursery rhymes and childrens songs are better than that. Sorry but it is horrid. Listen to some Bob Dylan or Kurt Cobain(Nirvana), those are excellent writers.
2007-01-02 06:48:32 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
ur a copier! That song is from the PussyCat Dollz. U didn't write it urself! Thatz playgerism! U can go 2 jail 4 that! Fur real!
2007-01-02 06:45:59 · answer #3 · answered by ~*2NE1*~ 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I think some verses are from the Pussycat Dolls-I don't need a man, No??
2007-01-02 06:44:01 · answer #4 · answered by kim 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Sounds like your trying to convince yourself...
It has potential however I didn't understand the lines
"Not looking for a real man" and " You will know if I feel you"
Those lines just didn't make any sense.
2007-01-02 06:43:47 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's very simple really. You should actually bring in some personal or heartfelt reasons behind it. Good music actually has some empathy behind it. Great music will capture your spirit and soul. ; )
2007-01-02 06:55:09 · answer #6 · answered by Chistiaŋ 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Sorry, but it isn't exactly my kind of music.
But I will tell you that saying "please" won't stop people from copying it. I wouldn't put anything on the Internet that I done, unless it had a copy write.
2007-01-02 06:45:15 · answer #7 · answered by Led*Zep*Babe 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
You might try being more subtle.
You obviously have been hurt and want to express that which is fin
2007-01-02 06:44:45 · answer #8 · answered by songndance1999 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Nothing like washing your dirty laudnry in public!
2007-01-02 06:45:04 · answer #9 · answered by Next evolutionary step... 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think u need a man..
2007-01-02 07:13:18 · answer #10 · answered by Clubber 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋