Ashley T
I love it! Its great! Listen to mine!
Hiding
I hide my face sometimes
the true inner me
but when people look
its plain for them to see
im hiding
im no angel
Im trapped
Im not just a girl
Im triing to hide my face under a mask
just to fit in
but when it comes to fame and fortune
then i just give in
let my true colors show
thats the way it goes,
so this is the real Ashley
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2007-01-02 05:49:25 · 13 answers · asked by Ashley T 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Okay... I came, I saw, I got the hell out.
2007-01-02 05:51:34 · answer #1 · answered by GMILF in training 1 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Here's mine:
Now I know
I still don't care
Stay away
From your ink and quill
OK. No more patience to keep this up
Just learn the difference between right and write. You're one of those people that misuses your and you're, aren't you?
By the way, your poem has no structure at all and no meaning. You skip over several different topics and don't stick to anything.
2007-01-02 13:55:52 · answer #2 · answered by Artemiseos 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It seems a bit incomplete. What are you trying to say? Who or what are you hiding from?
2007-01-02 13:52:51 · answer #3 · answered by NovoKane 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's "write" poetry
2007-01-02 13:52:40 · answer #4 · answered by Sue F 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
We know now... thanx for sharing that with us :)
2007-01-02 13:52:38 · answer #5 · answered by summer ♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its great but sad
2007-01-02 13:51:35 · answer #6 · answered by behnoush_k_1976 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
No..I didn't know that you "right" poetry
2007-01-02 13:51:51 · answer #7 · answered by Chewie 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Can you say "spell check"?
2007-01-02 13:52:16 · answer #8 · answered by T_I_GG_E_R 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
really good!! i love it!! yur a great poet...u should let ppl see the real u more often!!
2007-01-02 13:51:42 · answer #9 · answered by XxNew york eyesxX 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
That"s not bad, keep on writing........
2007-01-02 13:52:23 · answer #10 · answered by ♥ Becky ♥ 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋