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My Bubble Of Oxygen

I wish I had a way to write down this pain
So I don’t have to lie to myself anymore
I wish I had a way to extenuate this pain
So I don’t have to fell it anymore
My bubble’s leaving me
My bubble’s floating away

And I need a room to lock my sins in
I need to find a space to scream in
I’m suffocating
I need a shelter to crawl in
I hate the staring eyes they make
I am not on display
Stop looking at me that way.

2007-01-02 05:09:34 · 7 answers · asked by Jaded 7 in Entertainment & Music Polls & Surveys

Thank you so much *Sweet Thang* for your advice. ..and hehe i will give writing an encouraging poem a try. =))


Aww..thank you so much everyone for all your compliments, im seriously just blushing here. =))

2007-01-02 11:03:36 · update #1

7 answers

I love it! Its great! Listen to mine!

Hiding

I hide my face sometimes
the true inner me
but when people look
its plain for them to see
im hiding
im no angel
Im trapped
Im not just a girl
Im triing to hide my face under a mask
just to fit in
but when it comes to fame and fortune
then i just give in
let my true colors show
thats the way it goes,
so this is the real Ashley

2007-01-02 05:47:18 · answer #1 · answered by Ashley T 1 · 1 0

Wow, that's powerful...if you're feeling blue, writing a poem about it is always a good thing. I do that all the time. I totally understand what you're trying to say. I feel that way sometimes.

But, you know what also helps? Writing an encouraging poem. That makes you feel good about yourself. ; )

2007-01-02 13:25:44 · answer #2 · answered by ._. 5 · 0 0

that's deep...who doesn't need a room to lock their sins in. i like that line

2007-01-02 13:14:09 · answer #3 · answered by TKM2001 2 · 0 0

its good i like the title

2007-01-02 13:13:04 · answer #4 · answered by ? 3 · 0 0

WOW, thats pretty good!

2007-01-02 13:12:27 · answer #5 · answered by AlwAysAdreAmer 1 · 0 0

very awesome poem

2007-01-02 13:12:24 · answer #6 · answered by tdang424 7 · 0 0

it is good one

2007-01-02 13:13:15 · answer #7 · answered by mr.JAW58 5 · 0 0

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