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2007-01-02 03:50:51 · 11 answers · asked by Sexi B..i.t.c.h 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
There's no blog entry, just an introduction to yourself. Not a bad start, but a bit self-indulgent. Start writing more about what bugs you, surprises you, affronts you, surrounds you, affects you, inspires you and it might become interesting. Until then, consider yourself told.
2007-01-02 03:53:39 · answer #1 · answered by McAtterie 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
you have a mind-blowing base going. while the perspective differences from the apprentice to the grasp you ought to use a clearer transition. most of the descriptions looked uneven, as in case you weren't confident the place you have been going or a thank you to describe and that could take the reader out of the story.
2016-11-25 22:31:44 · answer #2 · answered by dextra 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Brilliant blog except it says two different things. Its says you live with your grandad at the top but below it says you live with your foster dad. I'm so sorry about your foster mum.
2007-01-02 03:56:02 · answer #3 · answered by dotty 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I mean, it's not the worst one ever. Give it time, and keep adding stuff that you think is cool. Add links to your other favorite sites too. Don't be too hard on yourself, you're new at it!
2007-01-02 03:58:38 · answer #4 · answered by clever nickname 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its a sweet page.
2007-01-02 03:53:54 · answer #5 · answered by staciesweet 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It seems good to me.
2007-01-02 03:58:56 · answer #6 · answered by Celebrity girl 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it!
2007-01-02 03:53:24 · answer #7 · answered by Λиδѓεy™ 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
keep it the way it is
2007-01-04 01:27:06 · answer #8 · answered by Ryan C 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was cute.
2007-01-02 03:53:23 · answer #9 · answered by ? 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i think so
2007-01-02 03:52:44 · answer #10 · answered by brock 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋