What does this poem mean to you?
If the world were full of peace.
You could live in happiness.
Catch this clue and you shall see.
This is a lot of fun for me.
You are as you should be.
Are you not?
Good.
Please help Im not sure what it means???
Thanks Ashley~
2007-01-02 03:04:32 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Sounds like an idealistic point of view. Like unrealistic expectations.
And I agree with the other's, it's not very well written.
2007-01-02 04:05:44 · answer #1 · answered by DishclothDiaries 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The idea that you wish to convey is that if the world were peaceful to live in then you would derive more happiness.
If you have written this, and you yourself do not know what it means ,then there is a problem ... How can I or others know therefore...? The whole is slovenly written and to have good poetry you should improve greatly on this particular one . It should convey clearly your emotions and express the right feelings at all times. E mail me if you so wish...
2007-01-02 17:47:06 · answer #2 · answered by raj k 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
<---poet.
I've written, edited poems for years.
This poem seems to be talking about peace on earth, but at the end, it is not peaceful. It's sardonic.
Also, it is poorly written. Elementary, at best.
2007-01-02 11:22:12 · answer #3 · answered by Dreaux~ 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
sounds like someone is casting out a beautiful future for you and them and entreating you to puzzle with it....
i prefer to stay clear away from the use of cliche in poetry and this one is heavy in cliche'
but what did it mean to you Ashley?
2007-01-02 12:40:12 · answer #4 · answered by ? 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It says to me, The world is what it is & all we can do is be our selves & try to live a happy prosperous life.
2007-01-02 11:15:36 · answer #5 · answered by jimbobob 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont know but it sounds like a stupid poem to me
2007-01-02 11:06:44 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋