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I mentioned the French revolution. How does this sound. (This will be the first bullet of approx. 5 on this subject.)


The French Revolution came about as a result of revolutionary experiments that were supposed to introduce “Liberty, Fraternity, and Equality" into French society

2007-01-02 02:36:10 · 1 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference Homework Help

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Not bad. I don't know if I like the use of the word "revolutionary" so soon after the word "revolution." Maybe substitute another word like "visionary" or another synonym for revolutionary.

2007-01-03 10:20:04 · answer #1 · answered by blackbird23 3 · 0 0

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