We call ourselves best friends,
And thought forever it would be,
No one believed we were close
We’re so different you see,
Forgot looks, personality and taste,
And ignored what they said,
We talked about other things,
Like boys and the books we read,
But one day she told me,
Something I thought she’d never say,
It concerned someone I cared about,
Since then we drifted apart each day,,
We’ve had so many arguments,
Sometimes every hour,
And then the things that never mattered then,
Showed us who we really are,
We still hang out together,
But she drives me insane,
Then I begin to wonder,
That each other’s company is in vain,
The only people who know about this
Is me and my so called friend,
And now I sometimes feel,
That our friendship is going to end.
does it suck.. i know it must be bit wobbly here and there... I'm 13 years old by the way
2007-01-01 23:58:45 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
and it is a true story... :)
2007-01-02 00:05:36 · update #1
being a true story i am kinda lost..
2007-01-02 00:06:25 · update #2
good!
2007-01-02 00:00:56 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah to be honest it does need a few touch ups, it's understandable but still needs a bit of work, keep at it girl, and i suggest that when your done, you show it to that friend of yours, this must really pain you, so she can know how you feel you know.
2007-01-02 11:02:35 · answer #2 · answered by Jess 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey your poem was really good but never think that the friendship ends bcoz friendship is precious and it will never end.
Anyway I liked it so much ya.
2007-01-02 08:41:34 · answer #3 · answered by PH 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds like a true story!
2007-01-02 08:02:24 · answer #4 · answered by ♥beautyfly♥ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
need to polish your style, read more, study the norms and follow your heart.
2007-01-02 08:18:04 · answer #5 · answered by gotaken 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is a very great poem.
2007-01-02 11:04:30 · answer #6 · answered by young grown man 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
13 years old??? Hell yeah it's good!
2007-01-02 08:13:54 · answer #7 · answered by Maria...* 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is a real e nice poem you got there it even rhymes
and for the award winning for best poem.........VERONICAS.......
2007-01-02 09:25:49 · answer #8 · answered by stm06 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it.
2007-01-02 08:35:56 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think this is your talent.
2007-01-02 08:03:31 · answer #10 · answered by Nana T. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋