Wonder-Pill
I thought i´d never find a love
that made me feel this way
i still cant believe my luck
especially when you look at me that way
i love to hold you in my arms
and i love the almost-kisses you give me before you leave
Hold me forever, baby
and i wont care if the world fades
Hold me forever, baby
and maybe i wont die away
You fill this void inside me
this void, i thought i could never fill
as clique as it sounds
you´re my wonder-pill
Hold me forever, baby
and i wont care if the world fades
Hold me forever, baby
and maybe i wont die away
2007-01-01 15:17:57 · 9 answers · asked by Jaded 7 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Ohh whoops sorry i meant to say cliche then. Thanlk you, Susie w. =))
2007-01-01 20:45:36 · update #1
Thank you* i mean. =D
2007-01-01 20:45:57 · update #2
Hey sugar n' spice, almost kisses are those kind of quick kisses that you give somebody, you know, right before leaving, where you kind of just about barely touch the other persons lips, but its still a kiss, a very light one. =)
2007-01-01 20:51:35 · update #3
Thank you so much everyone for your compliments, im really glad you liked it. =)
2007-01-01 20:52:15 · update #4
I like it. try to submitt it into an online poetry contest you could win or get published I have done it.
2007-01-01 15:28:25 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Instead of "clique" do you mean "cliche"?
Clique means a kind of exclusive group, cliche is a well-known, tired expression.
Just wondering if that helps!
2007-01-01 23:24:44 · answer #2 · answered by Susie w 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds like a smash hit. almost kisses? what are those?
2007-01-01 23:21:30 · answer #3 · answered by sugar n' spice 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
get a tight beet behing it and rap, that could be nice.
2007-01-01 23:21:03 · answer #4 · answered by Euphoria 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it. would make a really good song too.
2007-01-01 23:19:58 · answer #5 · answered by Jo 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it.....it sounds sweet
2007-01-01 23:24:04 · answer #6 · answered by *<i:o) 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
kool
2007-01-01 23:22:17 · answer #7 · answered by tdwatch 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice. but its too long.
2007-01-01 23:21:35 · answer #8 · answered by Anita 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like that a lot. :)
2007-01-01 23:21:16 · answer #9 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋