1991–2007 - Self employed - J-town, Ky
Pharmacist and Sales Representative
- Expanded territorial sales by 400%.
- Made and sell alternitive medications.
- Developed Excellence in Sales training course.
2007-01-01 14:51:38 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
No, You've to add some expressions as achieved, maintained, succeeded, assigned,promoted...
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2007-01-01 14:58:20 · answer #1 · answered by ® Espresso ® 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes and No.
First, it's unclear if you were a pharmacist or a sales representative during this period of time. You will probably want to distinguish one activty from the other.
You will also need to correct the spelling.
In 16 years of activity, having only 3 items/responsibilities as your 'notables' is a little anti-climactic. Try to write down EVERY activity that was business related, created new relationships between your customers and your suppliers, and that made you stand out among the other reps. Have a peer run down the list to see which items make the most impact, and expand on those a bit.
Good luck!
2007-01-01 22:58:00 · answer #2 · answered by CarinaPapa 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you got rid of the "made" part of the "Made and sell alternitive medications" and spelled alternative correctly, made up a legit sounding place of employment, and kept your tenses straight (made and sell?) I bet a lot of people wouldn't be able to tell you are a drug dealer.
2007-01-01 22:57:10 · answer #3 · answered by Kevin S 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It looks good, but spell words out in full. No abbreviations.
2007-01-01 22:53:33 · answer #4 · answered by chantell_hanna_2006 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would hope you'd at least fix the spelling and grammar
2007-01-01 22:54:06 · answer #5 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
No - looks like a drug dealer to me.
2007-01-01 22:52:46 · answer #6 · answered by gabound75 5 · 4⤊ 0⤋
Hmmm....I would ask probley ask you if you were the local drug dealer!
2007-01-01 22:55:02 · answer #7 · answered by Mamaof4 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like your a drug dealer but.........depends
2007-01-01 22:54:20 · answer #8 · answered by Wandering Sage 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
clean up ur spelling on it though!
2007-01-01 22:56:39 · answer #9 · answered by Screaming Banshee 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah
2007-01-01 22:54:18 · answer #10 · answered by ♪sweet_candy♫ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋