scars and wounds so deep
sweaty shirts, blood-stained dirt
our brothers who have fallen
our sisters whos tears are calling
many hate in the name of love
and forget to love in the name of hate
war is raw; backwards and stale
but may we prosper; in the name of the holy grail
2007-01-01 06:16:58 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
thank you all for your thoughts. Happy New Year!
2007-01-01 06:34:19 · update #1
to me the holy grail is the unattainable. A symbol of faith in the unknown. A reason to push forward even when there is no light to guide us.
2007-01-01 06:37:56 · update #2
Some of the rhymes seem forced, but there is one line I like alot...
many hate in the name of love
and forget to love in the name of hate
2007-01-01 06:18:54 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Here is another poem:
No Bush means No war,
Bush mind is raw which brings war,
Sweaty pants n southern accent,
y would ppl vote n criticise,
n vote n criticise again repeatedly,
is it hatred in the name of love?
or loving in the name of hate?
2007-01-01 14:21:35 · answer #2 · answered by Christopher 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow
well the only part i like was the last 3 lines but over all i think its good
2007-01-01 14:25:54 · answer #3 · answered by YinDenYang 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like your poem. It has a lot of feeling. There is something about the last line that I don't like. If it were my poem, I would change the last line. But, your poem is awesome!
2007-01-01 14:24:15 · answer #4 · answered by litewrka 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Oh my god! This is amazing! Did you write this? I felt like I was at the place of the war. That is truly touching! WOW!
2007-01-01 14:20:46 · answer #5 · answered by Maddie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good job! It makes me thankful for what I have and thankful for those who protect that!
2007-01-01 14:19:56 · answer #6 · answered by fastlanejiggy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I understand most of it and it sounds pretty good.
2007-01-01 14:24:32 · answer #7 · answered by jellybean 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't like it. It's self important and dull.
2007-01-01 15:50:58 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
don't understand the last line.
2007-01-01 14:19:37 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
you lost the end. ... holy gate.
2007-01-01 14:26:36 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋