As I looked
up into the sky
the stars were shining
so very bright
sharing their wisdom
beauty and light
showing their freedom
as they unite
closing my eyes
while thinking of you
are you thinking
about me too?
please look closely
up at the stars
you will feel me
touch your heart
the miles between us
doesn't mean .....
of one another
we can't dream -
so when you feel
I am too far
just look for me
up in the stars!!
2007-01-01 05:24:31 · 18 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
u wrote that? it is excellant, put it to music and u've got a winner
2007-01-01 05:27:46 · answer #1 · answered by Nora G 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is a very nice poem and very romantic. I can envision doing that and thinking of someone I love. Bravo!
2007-01-01 13:27:39 · answer #2 · answered by bdancer43 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Touching.
2007-01-01 13:26:26 · answer #3 · answered by Gone fishin' 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats really nice, you shouldn't waste your talents here on Y!. go to www.unsolvedmysteries.com its a place that you can actually write and get good feed back from a bunch of neat ppl.
2007-01-01 13:27:17 · answer #4 · answered by phe_03 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's really sweet! Happy New Year!
2007-01-01 13:27:19 · answer #5 · answered by PT 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice poem
2007-01-01 13:26:40 · answer #6 · answered by brock 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That totally rocks :)
2007-01-01 13:27:12 · answer #7 · answered by kuenn7287 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
J-Lo, is that you ??
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Edit - I like the poem a lot BTW. I only just read it properly.
2007-01-01 13:26:27 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Keep looking honey keep looking! lol
2007-01-01 13:33:51 · answer #9 · answered by Pinky 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats a really kool poem!! i like it
2007-01-01 13:26:11 · answer #10 · answered by blue'n'pink stars 9 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋