Please tell what you think of this poem?Is it any good?can i make it better,how? What do you think she'sfeel

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A Lovers Farewell

I’m here alone once again,
I’ve lost you; my best friend.
I hang my head, blink back the tears,
But I know that now you’re in a world with no fear.
A place of no pain,
A place of no shame.
And I know that I’m just the stupid girl that gave you my heart,
But you did this and tore it apart.
I don’t really know what I feel,
And because of this I don’t know how to heal.
What made you think you were so worthless?
And that you were allowed to put me through this?!
I don’t know what to say,
So I just bow my head and pray.
Is this my fault, was I too tough?
Did I not tell you that I loved you enough?
The day you found me, you saved my life,
So why couldn’t I save you from the knife?!?
If I had taken the time to listen to what you said,
Then today would you be dead?
But you planed this from the start,
You left a note with my name and a heart.
As I read the words you wrote to me,
You still speak of things that could be.
And the way things were before me and you,
And you say that I did save you.
I don’t know how, and I don’t know why you think so,
And if I did, then why’d you go?
So It’s just me, there’s no more us,
But how I long for the feel of your touch….
But now I’m strong enough to say good-bye,
And so good-bye, my love. Good-bye…..

I don't know but I feel like she's going through anger and what he did, then sadness about it at the same time.... Pain because she's alone, but guilt for feeling that too...

Answer 1

its good...
a poem is your self expression, just write what you wanna say and ou'll be fine...this one is good

Answer 2

its good and i gave u a thumbs up