the love of my life
one day on school bus
amanda passed me a note
then the driver came back and got
but before he could read it i read what it said
**chorus**
baby i love you
never want to lose you
and if i got down on my knee right now would you take my hand
and be the love of my life
now were grown-up and she's my wife
15 years ago seems like yesterday
and still get's to me
one night out in the yard when the rain started to pour
i said
baby i love you
i never wanna lose you
and if i got down on my knees and give you my hand
would you be the love of my life tonight
now i'm 60 and have 5 kids
but somehow i still find a way to tell her
that she's the love of my life
oh i will never let you go
i will never lose you
tonight i'm asking will you do me the honor of being
the love of my life
will you my world
will you make me whole
sweetheart will you be the love of my life
this is an original song that i wrote so what do you think of it.
2006-12-31 07:11:32 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
great! But do u have the voice to sing it? This would be a good song to sing if it had the right beat and like some great band sang. Great lyrics tho!
2006-12-31 07:14:29 · answer #1 · answered by ~V@NN@H~ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a little too similar to George Strait's song Check Yes or No.
2006-12-31 07:13:03 · answer #2 · answered by suburban_thrill 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like the lyrics. What style is it going to be? I believe either country or alternative rock would fit it perfectly. Keep up the good work and don't listen to the losers above me! :P
2006-12-31 07:21:02 · answer #3 · answered by Siervocal 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's a really sweet song. a liitle too short though. add some more get the right music and singer. and you have your song.
2006-12-31 07:21:06 · answer #4 · answered by Carpe Diem (Seize The Day) 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
meh, sounds to typical country
keep trying
2006-12-31 07:15:11 · answer #5 · answered by digby_by 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
not bad . find the right music for it.
2006-12-31 07:14:25 · answer #6 · answered by StarShine G 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
kind of corny
2006-12-31 07:16:03 · answer #7 · answered by healthyleeroy 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋