My self, my self,
my lovely lovely self,
it is my self in which I would recline.
(Thank you)
2006-12-31 06:08:34 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Ratrace,
Sorry to hear you are an English teacher. That pretty much disqualifies you from doing anything worthwhile with the English language other than what you can do for your students. Since when has an English teacher ever done anything profound outside of the classroom?
2006-12-31 06:15:24 · update #1
Rous?
What's up with that? "My" and "self" are two words. I didn't make them one, and that was on purpose. You think I don't know that "myself" is a word? You must think quite lowly of me, and therefore of yourself.
2006-12-31 06:22:57 · update #2
I don't like poetry. I think your poem has turned me off on the written word all together.
2006-12-31 06:11:01 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Um...
I don't get what "it is myself in which I would recline" means. Is there supposed to be a specific rhythm? It's short, for a poem and all, and it's not a haiku, so I really don't understand.
Good try on poetry, though!
2006-12-31 14:11:56 · answer #2 · answered by xxWannabeWriterxx 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Short and straight to the point and I am very glad that you are so comfortable with your self. Now, what would YOU think if I or one of the other answerer's had written it & asked this question?
2006-12-31 15:43:20 · answer #3 · answered by Donna J 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Needs more detail
why lovely ?
more about this "my self"
do you mean you belong to your self... is ownership implied?
... You are comfortable in your being?
2006-12-31 21:48:39 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
short an to the point
2006-12-31 14:10:52 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is a nice poem. self love is important...but is yourself ok with sharing yourself 's love with others. (that is the question)
2006-12-31 15:02:16 · answer #6 · answered by TraderJoe 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
to be honest it sounded like you wrote it in 2 minutes. But yet it sounds so familar.
2006-12-31 14:12:45 · answer #7 · answered by Nikki 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Expand up on it? And you must really love yourself.
2006-12-31 14:11:29 · answer #8 · answered by ~Les~ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Myself" is one word, not two.
The last line should read:
It is in myself in which I would recline."
Otherwise, not too bad, albeit a bit short.
2006-12-31 14:16:33 · answer #9 · answered by rouschkateer 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
egoistic, not enough imagination,you ask and that was my first impression,not meaning to be harsh
2006-12-31 14:12:51 · answer #10 · answered by janieloveday 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋