your lovable, playful, intelligent, bright ,
sleepy by day and active by night
gracefully beautiful,incredably groomed
no need for fine feathers but expensive perfume,
Sultry,provocative,suductive and more
your the one my heart will always adore
when the day has been bad and life feels flat
i retern home to you ......
my darling cat
im 10................ dose it reek??
2006-12-31 00:19:38 · 12 answers · asked by Lacadema (Role-player) 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
i like it..also cuz its not too long not too short
2006-12-31 02:38:33 · answer #1 · answered by drg 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
wow for a ten year old, you have some talent... I hope you keep it up dear.. Your poem is beautiful... You should try and get it posted on a poem website... with your name up... do a google search... Be proud of your work...
2006-12-31 09:33:07 · answer #2 · answered by jibi42002 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is alright, sounds like a greeting card, but poetry is in the eyes of the reader, it cannot be judged...
2006-12-31 09:32:42 · answer #3 · answered by Boston Bluefish 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is very good and i write poetry myself! It is hard to believe that you are only 10 years old!! You have quite a talent there !!! Keep it up because you are only going to get better!! GOOD LUCK&HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!
2006-12-31 09:17:52 · answer #4 · answered by linda bug 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it a lot it shows that you are a good writer at such a young age
2006-12-31 10:27:31 · answer #5 · answered by JennLee 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes i love it
2006-12-31 08:29:25 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
There are some spelling mistakes, but it's a great poem. ^_^ I like it~! ^__^
2006-12-31 09:12:11 · answer #7 · answered by kawaiisuzakuwarrior 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its good.
2006-12-31 08:31:02 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
no i love it
2006-12-31 10:50:29 · answer #9 · answered by angel_alyssa_101 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Suzan
u r a great poet. please mail me on
Candy
2006-12-31 08:43:49 · answer #10 · answered by candy 07 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋