Do you like my book?

Question

This is just the FIRST chapter:
http://www.teenspot.com/boards/showthread.html?t=364225


So the question is: "Do you like it?". T I

Answer 1

wow....that was an amasing story. i was totaly hooked, and i compleatly disagree with the dude who posted on that site, once apon a time is as good an opening as any. i would love to read more. so if its not to much truble would u be willing to email it to me as u write each chapter?
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send me an e mail, or dont and ill take that as a no lol =)

Answer 2

l like it. It seems to have a lot of places to go. Good job! The once upon a time could come out and maybe cut some of the flowery descriptives.
I would love to be kept up to date on your progress and see where you take this story.

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Answer 3

I read your story. I liked it very much. However there are some mistakes. Seems like you do not know how to apply thou, thee, thy and thine correctly.
thou - You (mostly used)
thee - You (used almost only after infinitives)
thy - your
thine - yours
Or on second thoughts, dont use them at all. And PLEAAAAASE dont begin the story with Once upon a time.And a wife wouldnt bless her husband. And a guard cannot simply speak to a king. Continue writing. Good Luck
Apart from these things, your story was remarkable.

Answer 4

I didn't finish reading it because I have to get ready to go to los Angeles, CA for the Dick Clark's New Year's Rockin Eve 2007. Be sure to see me sing with my band on the 31st! So, about your chaper, so far ILOVE IT!I'll try to keep reading it, once I get there. You are such a wonderful writter!

Answer 5

It's good I like it! I'm not going to give you advice because I'm not a writer but,keep writing it was good! I would love to see it finished.You have a talent.Finish "Wolf" it will be a good book!

Answer 6

to be quite honest, i lost interest after how it started with the "once upon a time"

sorry :/

Answer 7

i like your book and i like you too because i`m 15
so this is my email:[e-mail] or [e-mail] see ya bye