I've written this for someone very special to me. We haven't spoken in a month. The poem says it all....should I let him read this or would that make me look foolish? I want him to know how I feel, but also don't want him to think i'm trying to make him feel guilty. Neither of us are very good at talking about our feelings or emotions and never have been. Love and Light to everyone :)
"It's hard to digest this swelling in my throat
yearning for you, but I've lost all hope
It's taken some time, but I've decided
this isn't worth your love, unrequited
pain, misery, sorrow, regret
I will move on, though never forget
these trembling lips will be made still
in hopes that another, your place, might fill."
2006-12-29 09:42:28 · 11 answers · asked by CherBear 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
Nice poem, but I think more cathartic for you and not worth giving to him to read. The time has passed and it is over.
2006-12-29 09:47:37 · answer #1 · answered by mr_slacker70 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Frankly i'm foxed.A mom no longer letting her youngster to envision books from the library with the aid of fact in ninety 9.ninety 9% situations mothers ought to coax & yell to cause them to examine books.looks like there is something deeper than meets the attention.Are you in basic terms piling up books in all places & your quip approximately "books are my drug" is exceptionally unusual. If each and every thing is favourite why do no longer you have a cool communicate with your mom & tell her the magnitude of books & understanding.
2016-10-06 04:31:55 · answer #2 · answered by alia 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like your poem. Send it to him, even though you maybe should have done that two or three weeks ago. Send it to him because I know it will make you feel better. That is one beautiful poem, written by a beautiful girl, I'm sure.
2006-12-29 09:54:11 · answer #3 · answered by BigJake418 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
That's nice!! If you are not good expressing your feeling, i think this is the best way!! let him read it!! that was you intention when you wrote it, wasn't it?? It's NOT wrong to let someone you care know how you feel.Communication it very important in every relationship!
2006-12-29 09:52:16 · answer #4 · answered by mamachula01 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Wow! Can we borrow that one? Very well done. You should send it to him. And then, move on. Tomorrow is another day. The sun wil shine again.
2006-12-29 09:51:16 · answer #5 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Don't let him read it....YOU read it to him...flatter the poem with your voice and express it only as you meant it to be interpret!!!!
2006-12-29 10:15:38 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
let him read it sometimes what we can't say comes out better in writing and him reading it may get you two to talking good luck
2006-12-29 09:47:13 · answer #7 · answered by shedevilang 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Sure, go for it. I'm certain he'll appreciate it....nice poem though!
2006-12-29 09:59:50 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Excellent poetry....but I would not let him read it. He probably "wouldn't get it"! Nice job though!
2006-12-29 09:48:04 · answer #9 · answered by olderbutwiser 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
that's an awesome poem, congratulations, you're very talented. i think you should let him read it!!
2006-12-29 09:47:23 · answer #10 · answered by *KiM* 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋