A girl buys a horse at auction and the horse is a purebred Trakenher. The story twists when the horse is a colt that her grandfather had stolen from him in the 1970s. The colt is the colt of the colt that was stolen, more so. Her grandfather had imported the Trakenher to help rebuild the breed inorder of it's survival. Where the colt came from it has a history. At four years old the colt has been floating around and is poorly raised. The horse came from an established farm where a younger women was killled by the colt. He threw her into the arena fence. The husband wants the colt dead but the wife had left the colt to her sister. The sister had immediately sold it to get money and ensure it's safety. Kaelah is the girl who gets it and has to face the man who's wife the horse has killed.... and dah dah dah dah dah. Well?
2006-12-29 08:58:58 · 7 answers · asked by nicpiperloe 2 in Pets ➔ Other - Pets
Thanks for the support if so. I had to write a summary in a 1000 letters so it is kinda etch and sketch. I like the consttructive criticism as well.
2006-12-29 10:46:40 · update #1
ohh I mean the colt is out of the stud who's sire was the colt that was stolen each. I figured it out that it could work if they were late bloomers.
2006-12-29 10:49:28 · update #2
ohh I mean the colt is out of the stud who's sire was the colt that was stolen . I figured out that it could work if they were each in their early 20s. And that is possible.
2006-12-29 10:50:57 · update #3
Uh, the storyline seems a little convoluted. It's hard to follow where you are going and you seem to contradict yourself a few times.
2006-12-29 09:02:22 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you confused us when you said the horse is a colt stoleni n the 1970's. Don't you mean the descendant of a colt solen in the 1970's? The story line seems very interesting and I would definitely read this story. Go for it!
2006-12-29 09:59:55 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would read it. I think it has potential. does the man stalk her or try to kill the horse on his own? is the horse a wild horse who becomes tame around this girl like he knows that she is suppose to have him? Is the man and the girl somehow related and dont know it (like he is her long lost uncle?) does the horse end up saving the mans life or something. These are just some ideas to help your story if you want them. You can make a great book out of what you have. Good luck and keep at it.
2006-12-29 09:17:08 · answer #3 · answered by Ryne's proud mommy 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The colt would be BY the stud, OUT of the mare.
2007-01-01 18:33:15 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
would def. read it. it sounds very good. might want to elaborate a bit more on everything but i love it
2006-12-29 09:25:32 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Maybe, but your plot is not presented very well. Sounds very confusing.
2006-12-29 09:08:30 · answer #6 · answered by Tickle Monster 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well yes he has to face her.
2006-12-29 09:00:42 · answer #7 · answered by momocbrowncomet 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋