Pain,and agony....felt better,than misery.
despite what,you've done to me,
it only brought,hatred in me,
If i told you..you wouldnt understand,
you just took life........by the hand,
im not leaving,i feel like screaming...D@MN?
I always hated...... the fact,that you lied,
I just can't take this $hit,i'd rather die.
just one more chance...
2006-12-29 06:33:59 · 17 answers · asked by Fo-Shizzle 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
i just did it for the helluvit,so if ure talkin $hit,then shut up,and get a life.
2006-12-29 06:41:13 · update #1
how is this poem funny? are you like retarded. you need to get a life. yea thats real nice....NOT!!!! wow an i thot i had problems.
2006-12-29 06:36:31 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
That would be a good rap. If u can rap good make up a rhythm and rap it. It would sound really good.
2006-12-29 14:36:38 · answer #2 · answered by I love Kevin Costner 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
the one that wrote that should really learn how to not give a d@mn
2006-12-29 14:38:24 · answer #3 · answered by Turkey Man 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It sounds good...you put some emotion in it..congrats!
2006-12-29 14:37:40 · answer #4 · answered by Re 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's very sad and depressing, but otherwise I liked it.
2006-12-29 14:37:00 · answer #5 · answered by Yomi 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
not to bad. in my sick twisted mind i somhow liked it!very good.âº
2006-12-29 15:01:34 · answer #6 · answered by SinisterKid 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
how long were ya'll together. the he!! with them,. you better off wiout them anyway. your are too creative for them.
blow them offfffffffffff
2006-12-29 14:37:09 · answer #7 · answered by go4itgirl 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Yeah sounds real nice.. not
2006-12-29 14:35:26 · answer #8 · answered by just_acali_girl 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
It's good, dark, but good.
2006-12-29 14:39:56 · answer #9 · answered by ♥Luz Sin Gravedad♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its pretty good it kinda sounds amatuer-ish but its pretty good!
2006-12-29 14:36:21 · answer #10 · answered by hello 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋