Do you like this poem I wrote?

Question

My Sister

You are like a lively roller coaster,
Your personality is very fun.
This may seem strange, but your emotions stir,
They can even go further than the sun,
Your emotions can sometimes go too low.
Shall I say to me, this happens a lot,
This usually gives me great sorrow.
On the other hand, we can make this caught,
We can make our friendship like sunlight.
So let’s make it rise, to the very top,
Until the sky is oh so very bright.
Till that very point, we won’t have to stop.
I greatly hope this ride will never end,
I truly know that you are my best friend.

Answer 1

Its a good start but you really need to work on the flow of the poem.

Answer 2

i like this poem very very much
as much as i like the movie starsky and hutch.
one day, you might become famous.
so if someone copies this poem you better claim this.
hehe. see i can write poems too.
and they don't stink, either. at least not like poo.

Answer 3

Yes! Its very lovely and you should be a poet

Answer 4

No. Dang! You put the words "a lot" in a poem???

Answer 5

I like it, is it aimed at someone who maybe bi-polar? (I ask this sincerely)

Answer 6

cooool i like it so much
wrote another

plz>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Answer 7

its good, but it doesnt seem "from the heart". to me, it felt kinda "empty"

Answer 8

Its cool I like it!

Answer 9

i like it

Answer 10

nope