you know it isnt over, so save your goodbies
you know were gonna last forever
so dry tha tears from your eyes
and im gonna miss you
i know you'll miss me too
but baby dont worry im comin back to you
im comin back to u i swear it
n e thing stoppin me forget it
its been to long and we made it to far
and not seein u would be just to hard
oh im comin back to you
you know havin you in my life
it couldnt be not better
its like the ultimate high
and baby i love you
i know you love me too
but baby dont worry im comin back to you
im gonna be gone, but just for a while
but baby dont worry ill be just fine
im gonna miss you
i know you'll miss me too
but baby dont worry im comin back to you
2006-12-28 19:17:47 · 15 answers · asked by atreyufan4life 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
this is more of an accoustic song...i can not sing real well but my girlfriend can so shes going to sing it
2006-12-28 19:26:20 · update #1
A little bit of a downer, but you could probably turn it into a pretty decent Country Music song.
Reasonably nice poetry. I'd say it has potential.
2006-12-28 20:21:15 · answer #1 · answered by Warren D 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awesome!
2006-12-29 03:20:12 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think about a love song
2006-12-29 03:20:15 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's very good!! someone will probably pinch your hard work now & make a song out of it !!
2006-12-29 03:27:29 · answer #4 · answered by ausblue 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its great. but depending on the style its in, hip hop/pop is the best way to go.
2006-12-29 03:20:57 · answer #5 · answered by mimibug93 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not too impressive :( it's all you feel and put on the paper, need improvements........ keep trying
Sorry if you feel bad!
2006-12-29 03:20:52 · answer #6 · answered by kumarajayleo 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's alright, put more feeling into it.
You misspelled goodbyes
2006-12-29 03:19:41 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I reallly like it!! seems like you have some talent!! Keep it up!
2006-12-29 03:24:25 · answer #8 · answered by Grace123 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey its kool..i mean did u flik it somewhr????lolz...sounds lik back street boys song
2006-12-29 03:22:54 · answer #9 · answered by deep 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a very sweet poem.I loveit.But it left me with tears in my eyes.
2006-12-29 03:21:49 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋