ive been hung up on this poem im writting for a dear friend who loves dark poetry. i have serched the web profoundley in search of some rhyming gothic peices but so far no luck. my intentions are not to copywrite, but to grasp this dark concept that im in desprate need of .
2006-12-28 19:03:11 · 6 answers · asked by Fallen Angels Never Cry 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
I am a great fan of the Gothic works. I've written some rather dark works of my own (not to brag). If you want, I would be more than willing to help in anyway I can. Just let me know, but in the mean time I suggest that you not look towards rhyme just yet, merely content. Rhyme itself can be solved in ease with a vast knowledge of synonyms.
Also, if you could, could you please break the tiebreaker of one of my questions. It would be a great deed if you did. The title is along the lines of "Dear readers, please critique this, my latest submission. Who knows, you might even find an inspiration of darkness in that nightmare of mine.
Also, I believe even the Fallen Angels cry when they think of their former home.
2006-12-28 20:26:19 · answer #1 · answered by silenceheldstill 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It kinda sounds like your premise is a gothic chick attempting to cajole some guy to offload his lady pal and be with you. That or a demon competing with a succubus for a soul. If it is your purpose, then you definately're basically a pair of polishes away. As grievance, you do not want the be conscious heardstrong, and it detracts out of your poem via mirroring area of a lyric from a widespread rock song, and your connection with neverland jogs my memory of Michael Jackson. Your maximum efficient lines are: "The purity leaves on the door, the purity stains my appeal. I take the scars I bare, the burden you load, the detest we experience." sturdy luck!
2016-10-19 03:10:59 · answer #2 · answered by atalanta 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dear, you need some simple lessons in grammar and spelling (not to mention sentence structure) first. Then worry about the (chuckle) dark side of poetry.
2006-12-28 19:51:18 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Edgar Allen Poe is fun to read.
2006-12-29 08:21:54 · answer #4 · answered by JenJen 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, there is a spelling checker that you should use!
2006-12-28 22:25:51 · answer #5 · answered by jacquesh2001 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
why not wrap your brain aroung Poe?
2006-12-29 00:29:17 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋