My idea...?

Question

For a story is that:

An unpopular girl wants to get revenge on a cheerleader. She kills the cheerleader.

In the story there will be twists and a lot more but that is just the plot.

Is the unpopular girl mentally unstable? No Just really pissed off :]

Is the death an accident? Partly yes.

If the girl is so unpopular, what makes her so confident that she can get revenge on this cheerleader? The cheerleader has bullied her for so many years she just gets fed up kills her.

Answer 1

Oh, WOW! I mean, revenge is sweet, but killing?! That DOES sound like a page-turner, though! I wish you luck!

Here are some questions :

Is the unpopular girl mentally unstable?

Is the death an accident?

If the girl is so unpopular, what makes her so confident that she can get revenge on this cheerleader?

I know you probably don't want to spoil it, but keep us updated, ok? I mean, send out a message screaming, "WOOHOO, I GOT IT PUBLISHED!"

Once again, good luck! Great idea!

Answer 2

How about making the unpopular girl look alot like the cheerleader... she could then replace the cheerleader pretty much everywhere (even at home if the cheerleader's parents don't really have time for their daughter and are too busy with their own life....) The unpopular girl could then see that the cheerleader who was so popular was really sooo unhappy and this would be the ultimate revenge on the unpopular girl for having killed... she'd have to live the rest of her life knowing she killed someone who was even unhappier than she was...hmmmmmmmmm.... feel free to use it....

What's the title? Till death do we cheer....?

Answer 3

I really do think that killing the cheerleader is a little too much! Maybe tone it down a bit. Other than that, it sounds like an interesting idea. Good luck!

Answer 4

Is this a story idea or a fantasy of yours?
Killing is a bit harsh. Maybe she could have an affair with the cheerleader's father (or mother) instead.

Answer 5

i think it would work as a comedy for a screenplay. sounds good.