What do you think of the song I wrote?

Question

It's a fast paced song.

Sitting
On the couch, watchin' the reruns of my
favorite TV show

Waitin'
for you to call, 'cause it's boring here,
And I want to let you know
Let's Go!
(chorus) Out tonight,
It's a Friday night, let's get our party on.
Yeah!
Let's Dance, from the fall of night
until the rise of dawn.(chorus end.)
Phone rings
I'm drivin' down the road.
Listenin'
to the raindrops on the hood.
That's all I remember, my friend took the paper home to finish the song (there are several more verses).

Answer 1

that is a very good song

Answer 2

for a second i thought "That's all I remember, my friend took the paper home to finish the song (there are several more verses)." Was part of the song! lol! I like it, it very nice

Answer 3

I could totally see you opening for Green Day or Offspring. Blows Averil Lavigne away!!!!

Answer 4

That sounds nice. E-mail me. I could get you signed to a record deal. Send me a pic of you, too.

Answer 5

i don't see the connection of the two parts between the chorus.

Answer 6

It's pretty good. I can't give you my full opinion without looking at all of it, but what I've seen is good!

Answer 7

Cute, but a bit typical, lyrics seem too unoriginal, but that doesn't mean it's bad.

Answer 8

It's good. It would probably sound better if i could here it with music. Good job!

Answer 9

it would b better if u had the rest of the song but i like it

Answer 10

it seems good but u need to add the tune