Can you please tell me what you think of this intro to my story?

Question

I'm writing my first satire.Tell me what you think of the intro please------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Late on a balmy summer's evening, a few hours before the events that led to the destruction of the world began, I arrived at the city of Lundda. Word has it that this was the greatest city in the world.
That night I was quite happy with the way everything went. The city wasn't as costly as I had expected and I managed to taste some of its legendary joys. That included feverish sex with one of those famous Lunddan prostitutes and getting drunk on the finest spirits I'd ever tasted. I went to bed utterly satisfied with the way things were going.
As I laid my head on the pillow I revised my plans for the next day. I would wake up early, have a quick breakfast, pay the innkeeper, then go searching for the city's best breeder from whom I would buy a couple of blue hairy beasts, healthy male and female capable of mating------

Then I would return to the southern port of Buckelham and wait there for the first ship heading for my home country. I expected that if all went well, I would be home before the month ends. I closed my eyes and went to sleep with a smile on my face.

Yet during the two seconds that passed between the moment I opened my eyes on the next morning and the moment a wet, funny smelling, handkerchief descended upon my face and gently sent me back to sleep, I managed to develop an eerie feeling that things were not really going to proceed as planed.

It never crossed my mind though that I was becoming entangled in the nightmarish chain of events that led to the collapse of civilization as we know it and the total eradication of man kind . . . again.

Few hours later, I woke up screaming as a result of being deliberately placed in the path of the rushing contents of the coldest bucket of cold water I ever had my face splashed with. I was totally clueless as to what was happening to me.

Answer 1

You need to indent on the beginning of each paragraph. Spacing, and margins would be helpful too.......