Childhood Sweetheart No More
by Terence Baylon
Alone in my room for sleepless nights,
Hoping that my childhood sweetheart leave a note for me to sight,
We've known each other since we were young,
But didn't know anything about love,
Till there was this day we meet again,
I didnt realize that I was falling in love,
All I wanted is loving you for the rest of my life,
but due to misconception you sealed your heart,
Hoping one day you give me another chance,
To cherish you not just a childhood sweetheart, but as a childhood soulmate as eternity comes,
2006-12-27 03:36:34 · 5 answers · asked by Anvil dale 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Ohhhhhhhhhhh. Are youa poet. Cause it's seems like you are the one.
2006-12-27 05:47:09 · answer #1 · answered by chocolate~bunny 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Childhood Friends Poem
2016-12-17 03:26:17 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The grammatical errors really detract from what you're trying to say through your poem.
2006-12-27 04:05:42 · answer #3 · answered by AMEWzing 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
eh - first draft? Needs a little "tweaking" I think - good premise though.
good luck!
2006-12-27 03:54:48 · answer #4 · answered by tirebiter 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah....im not that into it
2006-12-27 03:48:46 · answer #5 · answered by liz 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋