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2006-12-26 15:15:30 · 17 answers · asked by LadyAlysse 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
deep very deep.
2006-12-26 15:18:10 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I don't think it qualifies as a poem. But if it's that bad and your a good person with love to give. Then maybe someone else will appreciate that love. Just figure out what you want in a relationship and not what type of person you want. Who knows maybe along that journey you will find some thing's to do and people to do them with that you can enjoy.
2006-12-26 15:22:31 · answer #2 · answered by lookaround 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
If you are writing poems to write, then I thought it was fairly good at expressing your feelings. Keep writing and add some poems that make you feel good to your collection. Don't stay on the same subject. Proof read your writings well before having others read them, mistakes interrupt the flow. Good luck with the poems and the fellow.(real or unreal)
2006-12-26 17:16:51 · answer #3 · answered by bailingwirewillfixit 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Awesome!!! I read your poem, you are really talented. Glad to see that you woke up, and your eyes are open to your worth. Its not too late, time has not been wasted on him, let this be a lesson to you. You deserve all the things you asked for in your poem, go out there and get it!!!!!!!! And don't look back!
2006-12-26 18:15:00 · answer #4 · answered by Kritikopoula 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋
WOW you sure do want alot lol.
Seems like you have been hurt in life. It will get better. The right person is out there waiting for you.
The poem was good
2006-12-26 15:19:33 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
It doesn't sing like good poems do. But the expression is good. It is good to know what you want. BTW I reported nilbog2u. Your picture is lovely.
2006-12-26 16:55:46 · answer #6 · answered by Mr. Bodhisattva 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's not very poetic, infact the only poetic trait is has is the rhyme scheme, which is just as well 4th grade.
Might as well just put numbers and make a list of your unrealistic fantasies.
2006-12-26 15:18:40 · answer #7 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try changing the back round and font, it's hard to read. Like an optical illusion
2006-12-26 15:17:50 · answer #8 · answered by Yahoo Answer Rat 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sorry, here are mistakes:
line 3 you forgot the "u" in ounce.
line 21 you forgot the word "is"
third line from the bottom you forgot the "y" in the word lucky.
and don't start giving me s.hit because i don't capitalize or whatever. its a different thing and you know it (this goes to all of you).
otherwise it seems damn depressing but mostly good. sorry your christmas sucked.
haley
2006-12-26 15:27:05 · answer #9 · answered by haleysname 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds nice, but it also sounds like you was hurt emotionally over christmas.
2006-12-26 15:23:39 · answer #10 · answered by Zacklee 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I liked it. Sounds like we know the same person, unfortunately. :-(
2006-12-26 15:17:56 · answer #11 · answered by donnabellekc 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋