after i send the letter to him i ........... and i said i wish i would have not sent it to him before i think enough about it and before i made sure
2006-12-26 08:18:44 · 12 answers · asked by sosol 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
After I sent the letter to him, I cried and wished I hadn't sent it to him before I had thought it through and been sure I wanted him to know how I feel.
2006-12-26 08:26:59 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
too many i in the sentence.
after i send the letter to him i reconsider and i say i wish i would have not sent it to him before i thought enough about it and before i made sure
There is an issue with your tense jumping around, my suggestion is the following:
after sending the letter to him, i realized i didn't think about it completely.
btw: an appropriate, no a appropriate in your question
2006-12-26 16:43:07 · answer #2 · answered by Bradford K 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
After I sent the letter I realized that I should not have sent it to him before I had thought about it.
2006-12-26 16:23:54 · answer #3 · answered by david21495@sbcglobal.net 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
After I sent the letter to him I regretted having done so, and wished that I had thought it through more clearly.
2006-12-26 16:23:17 · answer #4 · answered by ceegt 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
After I sent the letter to him, I contemplated the situation and wished I didn't send it before I thought about enough and made sure.
2006-12-26 16:20:44 · answer #5 · answered by HS Sweetness 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
After I sent the letter to him, I recoiled in regret and wished that I had thought it through more clearly in advance.
2006-12-26 16:22:48 · answer #6 · answered by I hate friggin' crybabies 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I should have thought about it and made sure before I sent the letter to him
2006-12-26 16:20:55 · answer #7 · answered by magic 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
After I sent the letter to him, I regretted that I mailed it without giving it more thought.
2006-12-26 22:50:23 · answer #8 · answered by rhymer 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
after i sent the letter to him i cried and i said i wish i would have not sent it to him before i think enough about it and before i made sure.
After I sent the letter to him I cried saying that I wish I wouldn't have before I thought enough about it, and before I was sure.
2006-12-26 16:24:46 · answer #9 · answered by T. 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
before you ask someone to fill in the blanks, you could do the sentence in a better format, you know...it's "proper english" but has unnecessary junk in it
2006-12-26 16:22:32 · answer #10 · answered by nc_strawberry 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋