I can't decide if this sentence is a run-on or if it lacks parallel parts: Do you advise me to go to college or that I should get a job after high school? Maybe it is simple and I have just been staring at it for too long to figure it out!
2006-12-26 03:34:46 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Primary & Secondary Education
First where do you come from? Well I guess from USA, it will be better to go at collage, you should see College Life: challenge, friendship, party, fun, love and yes of course studying. There many good reasons you should go there. You will work entire all your life, don't waste the best years in your life, use them Wise ;)
2006-12-26 03:56:08 · answer #1 · answered by AleXxx 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why don't you just say, Do you advise me to go to college or get a job after high school. Your's is not a run on sentence, but I think it could be less wordy.
2006-12-26 03:38:21 · answer #2 · answered by karbaw 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you can afford it - go to college. There is no substitute for a college degree. You can get a better job. If you cant afford it - work till you can pay your fees. But go to college sometime - the sooner the better.
2006-12-26 03:51:50 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't think it's lacking parts, instead need to trim it down a bit to smooth it out. I'd just remove the "that I should" myself, sounds much smoother that way and doesn't change the meaning at all.
2006-12-26 03:59:01 · answer #4 · answered by Dark Angel 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Depends on you financial standing. Can you afford to go to school and do not work or work part-time. You may have to work a couple of months while you are getting student loans and grants, so it all depends.
2006-12-26 03:37:51 · answer #5 · answered by Big C 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
College is better.
2006-12-26 03:36:54 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
obviously keep studying is better. but if u dont like studying anymore, then just do what u like.
2006-12-26 05:44:48 · answer #7 · answered by monroe 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋