help me with my poem. if this is so impressive?

Question

There’s a sudden change in my life
Especially when you came with smiles
I don’t even see that I am the smiling type
But when you came, my life then excite.

We even not seen yet each other in person
But I know and I feel you’re a nice guy
I can proved it the way you gave me attention
Every time we talk and greet each other HI….

Someday, god will set us in the same direction
Somewhere, in a place with mix emotion
Somehow, not today, but I’m sure it will be a start of good relation…

Answer 1

Roses are Red
Violiets are Blue
You've already written the damn thing
What the heck to you want us to do?

Answer 2

not with out changeing half of it

There’s a sudden change in my life
Especially when you came with smiles
I don’t even see that I am the smiling type
But when you came, my life grew in excite.

We have not even seen yet each other in person
But I know and I feel you’re a great guy
It can be proved in the way you give me attention
Every time we talk and greet each other HI….

Someday, god will set us in the same direction
Somewhere, in a place with mix emotion
Somehow, some way may be not today, but I’m sure we will be an item to(2 or two ) in his collection(you could also use the varity of 2 or two instead of just to in his collection )

so it may look and sound like this

Someday, god will set us in the same direction
Somewhere, in a place with mix emotion
Somehow, some way may be not today, but I’m sure we will be an item 2 in his collection

Someday, god will set us in the same direction
Somewhere, in a place with mix emotion
Somehow, some way may be not today, but I’m sure we will be an item two in his collection

Answer 3

There once was a man from yahoo,
suggestions he wanted from you,
Some gave it a shot,
while others did not,
all in all the whole poem he should redo....

Answer 4

are we supposed to correct your grammer?? what help do u require?

Answer 5

sorry, but its not good!