Destiny
Movement slow
Or fast as it often goes
Fufillment lasts
But so many can forego
Its something small
Like a proposal
But weak
And tiny like a lone teardrop
Falling on a pillow
2006-12-25 18:04:38 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I don't think it's a good idea to post your work for all to see.
People can steal it and plagiarize... not give you credit at all.
It's pretty risky.
Just thought I'd let you know that. There are a lot of mean people out there.
2006-12-25 18:12:32 · answer #1 · answered by ( Kelly ) 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I've been to Six Flags over Texas and Im kinda scared of roller coasters too XD BONUS QUESTION: Is there anything you want me to do while in Chicago? I'll take pictures of me doing your request! Take a photo of you and Bugs Bunny at six flags XD if you want Wow i go to the bonus question before the real question. BTW did you see the question that has the clip of a lady thinking that's she's married to the Golden Gate Bridge? O.o I think Victor posted that... That was me who posted that, how could you forget :'( I'm kidding, but I did post it Now here's the questions... 1. What anime character would you love to spend a day in Six Flags with? Haruhi Suzumiya... Awesome 2. What currently running anime is most likely to end first? Bleach me guesses. 3. What anime character really needs a hug? L Lawliet 4. How do you think should come back from the grave? Pick an anime character or An old Reg Raditz from Dragon Ball, cause he had so little screen time :( 5. Would you ever want to work in the anime industry? If so do you want to work for the English side or the Japanese side? Depends if I ever learn japanese, if not, I'll work on the english side :D
2016-05-23 07:10:11 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I loved it as well--it is quite urbane. Until I read the title which totally doesn't fit and threw the whole poem crabwise... so the advise is keep the poem change the title
2006-12-25 18:40:22 · answer #3 · answered by lovel art 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I felt that the poem reached out to me and said "Be thankful for the little things for as long as you have them "
A lovely poem I enjoyed reading it several times.
2006-12-25 18:19:34 · answer #4 · answered by ANASTASIA_NIKOLAIEVNA_ROMANOVA 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The whole; "lone teardrop on the pillow" thing, is SoOoOoOo Cliche!
I hate that bit, get rid of it and do better for yourself and the rest of your otherwise very nice piece...
2006-12-25 18:10:59 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
your poem makes me sad.....make some more words rhyme ...i don't really get it. AND THE TEARDROP IS NOT CLICHE! IT'S SWEET! so what now other person
2006-12-25 18:14:31 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Kelly is right. Last two lines, cliche.
2006-12-25 19:02:47 · answer #7 · answered by chris_sensei2003 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's CRITIQUE....and yes you lost it on that cliche' final two lines.
2006-12-25 20:48:34 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋