Please give me a 1/10 review for my Yu-Gi-Oh! Deck and give advice on how it may be improved.?

Question

The deck is Harpie Themed and is as follows:

~~Monsters x17:

Harpie Lady 1 x3

Flying Kamakiri #1 x3

Birdface x2

Slate Warrior x3

Harpie Lady Sisters x2

Harpies Pet Baby Dragon x1

Bladefly x2

~~Spells x17:

Elegant Egotist x3

Enemy Controller x2

Double Spell x2

Magical Mallet x1

Mystical Space Typhoon x1

Pot of Avarice x1

Graceful Dice x1

Scapegoat x1

Heavy Storm x1

Rising Air Current x1

Heart of Clear Water x1

~~Traps x6:

Magic Jammer x1

Divine Wrath x1

Skull Dice x1

Mirror Force x1

Hysteric Party x2

Ultimate Offering x1

This deck is in advaned format. =)

Grrr, "advanced", sorry I can't spell today.

Answer 1

I didnt know people still played yu-gi-oh but maybe a 7 cause i only know about 30 of the cards.
My friends gonna take over now =P

You got to have at least 1 monster reborn, it can change the whole game in an instant. Also try having more traps they really come in handy.

Answer 2

I like this deck quite a bit, especially the monster selection. I might add a second Harpie's Pet Baby Dragon. In the spells and traps, I often recommend Inferno Reckless Summon to go with Harpie Lady 1. Heart of Clear Water does not have a lot of use here. I don't know that Pot of Avarice and Hysteric Party will work well both being in the same deck, though you are in want of the Pot for hand presence as well as recycling the suite. I can see why you don't have Icarus attack here, as you'd have to give up a precious Harpie for it, or else Birdface without getting the effect. Ultimate Offering might be overkill. It might be nice to see a little more s/t removal, but that's just a quibble; overall, this is really well put together. Of course, your addition is a little off - there are 16 monsters, 15 spells and 7 traps. Maybe you could fill in the missing bits.

Answer 3

To make monsters a bit stronger you might want to try to change around a Harpie Lady 1 to a Cyber Harpie Lady or even 2 of them to a Cyber Harpie Lady.....she is already at 1800 attack so is pretty strong for a 4 Star. Then if you can come across it throw in a lovely upgrade to Pet Baby Dragon called Harpie's Pet Dragon. Difficult to get but well worth the buy if you can find it. To keep it Advanced Style keep out the Monster Reborn that was suggested but I do agree that a few more Traps would be helpful. Try to throw in a couple/few of Sakuretsu Armors. Helpful for monster destruction if your opponent gets some higher monsters then you on the field. Otherwise give it a 7 right now as is.

Answer 4

Shadow ghoul sucks. yet now there has been a clean kind of card sorts called the synchro monsters that are designed for increasing one's existence factors. Nevermind, there are continually exciting formats to apply round this deck. they are : Monsters: Shadow Ghoul X 3 Nimble Momonga X 3 large Germ X3 Bubonic Vermin X 3 Troop DragonX 3 Mystic Tomato X 3 large Rat X 2 Kuriboh X 2 card trooper Sangan WotBF Magician of religion morphing jar Sinister Serpant Magic: Painful selection Card Destruction mind administration Monster Reborn untimely Burial enemy controller Heavy hurricane MST Shallow Grave X 3 Traps: 6 2 Magic Jammer Magic Cylinder Torrential Tribute reflect pressure call of the Haunted ok then, as many monsters interior the Gravyard as a chance! you may imagine i'm loopy for including a lot of revivals, yet they are for Mystic Tomato, Wotbf and Sangan. Painful selection is sweet, pick 5 monsters and examine an more beneficial four hundred ATK for SG already! in this deck, Sangan and Wotbf serve 2 applications. in the start, Witchy can get SG into your hand and make him plenty less difficult to play, yet in addition they get you the swarmers. in truth, i will upload Cannon Soldier X 3, to not basically do a lot of damage with all the swarm playing cards, besides the indisputable fact that it will develop the attack of Shadow Ghoul plenty. Sinister Serpent can come decrease back for your hand on each occasion he's necessary. Magic playing cards and capture playing cards are very uncomplicated, not some thing particular there. i don't have all the playing cards in this deck, yet i'd say that that is experience worth!

Answer 5

first off, you would want no more then 2 of the same monster.then put monsters like skilled dark magician and gyroid in your deck.now for your spells and traps, some of your cards are fine, but try putting cards like magic cylinder and soul exchange in your deck. also put cards like waboku, spellbinding circle, swords of revealing light and nightmare's steelcage in your deck to stop your opponent from attacking.that's the way i try to duel.

Answer 6

dont listen to new kids like alex, dont add skilled it has nothing to do with ur deck, it looks preety good, in shape, but the question is, could it stand up to a true deck like mine?

Answer 7

8, pretty good, I wish I had a Enemy Controller.

Answer 8

i agree with c.c.