It's nice to know someone's there
But to be alone it seems no one cares
We all love, We all hate
But to me we're just bait
Bait to anger to selfishness even sorrow
Whats it going to bring tomorrow?
2006-12-24 09:42:08 · 10 answers · asked by Julia B 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
Its a beautiful expression of the human condition. I wonder? Does she Know the positive human condition? where we all have unity in unconditional love in the heart of God. The loving presence is always there, love is undivided, No fear, anger,hate or sorrow. and no doubt tomorrow brings more Joy. As the colors of the rainbow are contained in sunlight, so to we are contained in Gods heart. How great her writing when she writes of these things.
2006-12-24 11:24:02 · answer #1 · answered by Weldon 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your friend needs to be more positive. She needs to learn to love herself more. If she is alone, she should be in good company.
2006-12-24 12:00:49 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its too....well, its obvious that it wasn't written by a scholar....its kinda too "rhymy" which makes it look like shallow (for a poem). what i'm trying to say is, it doesn't evoke my insides, it doesn't give me this profound feeling in my soul, like most great poems do.
2006-12-24 13:33:59 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its nicely presented, but I could live without it.
2006-12-24 10:06:04 · answer #4 · answered by ••Mott•• 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it; it says a lot in a few words.
2006-12-24 09:45:18 · answer #5 · answered by Dimples 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it really shows human nature and what life is really like
2006-12-24 09:55:22 · answer #6 · answered by starzrock92 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it its true she should put on a poetry line
2006-12-24 09:52:39 · answer #7 · answered by davids_jellybean2003 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice
2006-12-24 09:50:01 · answer #8 · answered by annie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
♥ ♥ I like it ♥ ♥
2006-12-24 09:43:38 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't know I hate poems.
CC
2006-12-24 09:49:58 · answer #10 · answered by CC 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋