1st Chorus :)
You wanna know why I was so obsessed?
It’s because I refused to speak, I guess.
Cause you were the reason why I breathed,
But now I find my self in another kind of a so happy life.
(Verse 1 :)
I might, have wished
to have you around
before, you left
I was way way crazy
But, when you, moved on
So did I
I guess, now I
Can spill all secrets
Cause I’m sure you’re wondering why I was crazy
But now I just can’t believe it cause
(repeat 1st chorus)
I know, that I
Am acting insane
But that’s, okay
I don’t mind it
It’s all, okay
But I don’t feel like it
Cause I’ve been feeling crazy
only for you
cause I still want you, baby
because I missed you, and
(repeat 1st chorus)
(bridge :)
I miss you
but nobody knows,
and I can’t live without you
oh, and I want you
by my side,
day and nite,
all the time, and
(2nd chorus :)
You wanna know why I’m so depressed,
It’s because I was so way over-stressed,
And because you met my every need,
You could make me fall into another kind of a so happy life
(repeat 1st chorus)
(repeat 2nd chorus)
(Ending :)
Oh, so happy life
2006-12-23 17:21:29 · 18 answers · asked by Angel Girl 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
You know, there is so many people out there in the world that have real talent, and you are one of them. Some "stars" don't have any talent at all! If you got an agent.....you would be famous!
Go for your dreams!! You are doing very well with those lyrics!!!!
Best Wishes,
KitKat
2006-12-23 17:25:17 · answer #1 · answered by KitKat 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
a million. its especially sturdy yet i've got faith like youre attempting to no longer uncomplicated to sound like a "political rapper" i like the placement however the lyrics desire greater soul like i've got faith the lyrics are basically thrown on there so each and every thing will rhyme even nonetheless it has to have a real menaing to you yet youre especially sturdy especially for a 14 12 months previous ohh additionally if youre searching for proposal for like the entire war difficulty hear to uncommon valour via jedi thoughts tricks
2016-10-28 06:47:28 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is okay. I think you make too much use of the "I" word
"I know, that I"
"So did I
I guess, now I"
"cause I still want you, baby
because I missed you, and"
It gets a little repetitive, try and vary your word vocabulary a little more but yes it was decent.
2006-12-23 17:24:16 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
girl, i love your songs....only 14....way cool. Just about my age. as i answered to your last question... I sing in a band and i could try and get them to put some music to your lyrics. but honey....if you don't want people talking your songs and doing stuff with them, don't put to many on here because you don't have a copywrite. if you ever wanna talk about your music with me, write me at "thishottie_is_already_taken@yahoo.com"
p.s.---this e-mail isn't for anyone else so f uck off!!!
2006-12-23 17:26:19 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it sounds pretty good, though it's hard to find the rythym without a soundbyte. I say keep writing!
2006-12-23 17:29:32 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
im 14. nice lyrics, almost as good as mine. j/k
go see some music proffessional dude and in 5 years you'll be famous. Good Luck.
2006-12-23 17:33:04 · answer #6 · answered by [♥moi♥] 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
AT 14. U R TOO YOUNG TO KNOW WHAT LOVE IS!!! JUST KEEP WRITEING TIL U R 18 THEN FIND SOME ONE TO HELP U OK!! U LL THANK ME CUZ U LL MAKES MONEY!!
2006-12-23 17:25:14 · answer #7 · answered by Ephradu 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is an awesome song. You ought to try to get it recorded. I know that I would buy it. Good luck!
2006-12-23 17:25:06 · answer #8 · answered by ashleighshea1982 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow u wrote that thats really great...soooooo where are u going to be touring lol...nice song.make an album soon
2006-12-23 17:24:04 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
those r really good....and u r only 14...i am 14 but i cant write for ****...ne ways those are really good...it isnt like any other song because it talks about u being obsessed and everything.... they r really good...where do u live?
2006-12-23 17:23:52 · answer #10 · answered by slhs_classof2010 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋