Can Anyone add 5 sentences onto this and have it fully develop the topic sentence...
In our area there are many interesting places (our points of historical interest) to visit seeing we live in kissimmee florida.25 years ago,our town was a cattlemans rodeo town.Then came Walt Disney.....
2006-12-23 13:27:22 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Start with some editing...
Living in Kissimee, FL, there are many points of historical interest to visit nearby. 25 years ago, this area was merely a cattlemans rodeo town. Then came Walt Disney.
I like the idea of a line like "...and along with Walt Disney World, Kissimee grew."
Couple of tips:
Don't write in 3rd person (I, our, we)
Do you have enough info to make Disney world fit your topic of places with historical interest? Sure, it is entertaining, but historically significant? Actually, scratch that. I guess for Kissimee, Disney world MADE the town.
You could put in some info about Walt Disney's clandestine land buying scheme right from the beginning, maybe throw in some facts about how Kissimees population changed during different points of Disney Worlds development. I dont know those, but I'm sure you could easily find some consensus reports. Good luck
2006-12-23 14:33:12 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-05-23 02:56:16 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
As Walt Disney designed the well known amusent park, Disney World, our town grew.
(i dont know much about that town but i just made something up...here is one sentence, maybe it will get your brain thinking on a track)
2006-12-23 14:00:20 · answer #3 · answered by blitzyflitzy294 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
www.kissimmee.org -
www.floridakiss.com -
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kissimmee,_Florida -
www.kissimmee.org/ch_dept_parks.aspx?id=379
2006-12-23 14:10:27 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋