Based on the lyrics alone?
It could be a great song, depending on the music.
What's the Pussycat Dolls song?
"Don't you wish your girlfriend was hot like me.. etc"
Are those brilliant lyrics? NO! But they're acceptable and they have a good beat.
2006-12-23 10:31:10
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answer #1
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answered by socialdeevolution 4
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unhappy or ROCK? ok.. i'm uncertain on that. If via unhappy you advise.... sluggish and sweetness of emo... Evanescence has a brilliant form of those, as properly as rock, which includes: hi such as you My Immortal Your famous individual lacking All that i'm residing For candy Sacrifice Weight of the international Going below The Veronicas: All I even have heavily broken In yet another existence somebody Wake Me Up My Chemical Romance has a brilliant form of sturdy rock songs, and so does Switchfoot.
2016-10-28 06:08:00
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answered by Anonymous
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bottom line it's your song and you can sing or play it how you want it. but my suggestion is that the verses are a little mixed up. The hook is too long to be a hook. Either way if I don't hear it I can't tell u whether it's good or not. Just do it how it sounds good to you.
2006-12-23 09:50:55
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answered by yleemoreno 3
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Hi friend,
Lyrics alone is not a song. Song is a combination of vocal on lyrics and music. But I am sure you can do a good song by putting good music on your excellent lyrics and if you have a good vocal. Song is the expression of your feeling by means of lyrics, vocal and music. Since you have done one step of your creation successfully please go ahead and try to finish and let us hear your beautiful song.
Personally my taste is classical...
Good luck!!!
2006-12-23 10:44:21
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answered by doo doo 2006 2
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depends, r and b song maybe, heavy medel not really, rap no way, rock not quite, like rock maybe
i hope this tells you an answer. its good for what it is, just make give it a kind of music and let you decide from there:)
2006-12-23 09:47:17
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answer #5
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answered by Kaylu 2
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It doesn't rhyme, it's basic known facts, men are going to leave women after deriving pleasure from them.
2006-12-23 09:47:26
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answered by Zidane 3
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I think it's good if it's a first try. It kinda describes something but... yeah... keep working on it though. you'll get better.
2006-12-23 09:52:31
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answered by Anonymous
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It depends on how you sing/rap it. in a rap form its ugly, but singing..... its cute
2006-12-23 09:49:39
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answered by Anonymous
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in my opinion no
2006-12-23 09:55:13
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answered by D B 1
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it stinks
2006-12-23 09:55:37
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answered by todd s 4
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