When we had suspicion
When I was very young
He told us we were totally wrong
He told us we were dumb
When I finally found out
When I was in need
All he saw was money
All he had was greed
Even though he was wrong
And he is totally to blame
Still he holds his head high
Still he has no shame
Still he rests the blame on me
When I try and bring things to a halt
And now everyone looks on me
As if it were all my fault
And I go and see him every day it seems
And see his lying face
And he takes out my files
As if he’s never seen my case
And then he looks over his glasses at me
And uses that patronising tone
And explains to me in great detail
What symptoms I have shown
He tells me what’s going to happen
And when we can resume
Then he looks at me politely
And makes me leave the room
He talks alone to my mum
She comes out with tears in her eyes
I don’t care what anyone says
He’s just a devil in disguise
2006-12-23 06:43:27 · 18 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
And all he brings is sadness
And all he brings is shame
And all the eyes do rest on me
Even though he is to blame
And I’ll always be different
But all he wants is cash
And when I tell him what I think
He says I’m being rash
I kick and punch and scream
And I try and get away
But in always forever the end
I always have to stay
Because I’m bound to this problem
And I’m bound to this curse
And please please just tell me now
Exactly how it could be worse
And I’m treated like a child
Because ‘I can’t handle the truth’
And I’m hated by the others
All I have now is my youth
When I was in sadness
I thought he had a soul
He picked me up and slit my throat
And threw me down a hole.
2006-12-23 06:43:37 · update #1
I really like that. It's relatable and you put across your emotions well. Well I know I can realte but thats because it sounds familiar.
If i may i think i might print it off and stick it on my wall.
Really random, but you should read
The perks of being a wallflower
it's an mtv book.
not sure who it's written by but there is this really good poem in it. Not because of what happens because it is quite dramatic but yeah, check it out.
2006-12-23 07:07:45 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
The best way to get back your ex is https://tr.im/C4dEa
Here's the hard part: Pretend she never existed, like it was all a dream, don't call her, that will make you the smaller person, be the bigger person since you deserve better, what she did to you on Valentines Day was immature, especially after dating for four years. This person wasted allot of your time and through it out the window. Go out tonight, even it it is only yourself, don't drink and call or feel sorry for yourself, this will only cause you embarrassment! I know your hurting..This will eventually will go away in time. Today is not a good day for you and your emotions are spinning all over the place.
Please, whatever you do, don't answer her calls and don't call her. If she keeps calling, which she pro bally won't, don't return her call for 5 days. Make her sweat and DO Not get back together right away if you discuss this in 5 days. Tell her since she Broke up with you, you have done allot of thinking, and had the taste of "being single again" and you would like more time being "friends" for now, so you are sure you are making the right decision. Remember "She decided she didn't want to be with you" so the door is open for you to get out and see what you have been missing for four years. You honestly need to do this for yourself.
She doesn't know, but what she did was give you the best valentines day present you will ever get! A new start and a new beginning, use it to your advantage. You will look back on this and Thank God this happened now instead of 4 more wasted years of YOUR life. Today does suck, stay Strong and I promise you your life is going to be so much more exciting and you are going to be happy. If you continue to call and call her, she will think of you as needy and won't want you. She is going to rethink what she did to you today and will be hurt, if you act like you could care less. Girls always want the ones they can't have. That is who you are now to her. Let her suffer,realizing what a mistake she made. This will drive her crazy. Right now she is on cloud 9 thinking you will take her back, OH, is she stupid!
Your life isn't ruined, hers is..She lost someone special, and gave you a gift to let to live life and find someone you deserve. You are not getting back at her, your teaching her what an idiot she is and what she lost and what you gained without her. SO when You eventually talk to her, tell her thank you for what she did...
She will be hurt and you will be happy!
2016-07-20 01:23:35 · answer #2 · answered by william 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Want to know how to get your ex back? Change yourself. Don't worry about changing other people, worry about changing yourself. Go to https://tr.im/zNG6L
Once you do that then you can start to worry about getting back together with your ex, other wise you will find that you are fighting about all the same things and getting no where. Do what it takes and I promise things will work out in your favor.
The funny thing is I came to the realization that I had to change a little too late. After I was kicked out and after I was about to lose the only things that truly mattered to me - her love. A funny thing happens when we truly love someone and lose them. We do what ever it takes to get them back. For me I had to drop bad habits that had caused not only our relationship to sour but practically every other relationship I had had in the past. Not only with women, but with friends, co-workers, family, you name it.
Which is why I say to you as my ex at the time said to me, the only thing you can do is change yourself. Work on yourself and improve on the person that you already are. Drop the negative things in your life that don't belong there and you will see all of your relationships start to take off to new heights.
2016-04-25 18:04:52 · answer #3 · answered by liana 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly, that was fantastic until...the bit about being thrown down a hole. I thought that bit was out of place, but the rest was very very good.
2006-12-23 06:48:50 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's great, albeit a little sad. I hope you can get the inspiration to write some happier poems in the future
2006-12-23 07:16:07 · answer #5 · answered by fozz89 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its touching, may Santa brings some really lasting joy and happiness for you and you find someone who can redress all the miseries of yours. Goodluck.
2006-12-23 06:51:08 · answer #6 · answered by SCULPTURIST 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I just wanna give you a great big hug and tell you everything's gonna be ok.
Merry Christmas xx
2006-12-23 07:08:15 · answer #7 · answered by Missing Link 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I am a little sad now,Ive read your little verse,I've read between the lines here,and it seems a little worse,I think its time you went and saw,a friend that you can trust, you can share your problem with them and I think that it's a must !
2006-12-23 07:12:30 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Excellent-keep writing.
2006-12-23 06:48:16 · answer #9 · answered by Spiny Norman 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
too long and too much simplstic language. show me the world truly through your eyes by describing it in ways that i'll find fresh and original. otherwise you're like every other writer with no edge.
2006-12-23 19:36:29 · answer #10 · answered by Brento! 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋