Could ya improve my deck?

Question

I ONLY need suggestion

Monsters x22
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Goblin Attack Force x2
Vorse Raider x3
Gemini Elf x3
Ninja Grandmaster Sasuke x2
Man-Eater Bug x2
Penguin Soldier x2
Kinetic Soldier x3
Jinzo x1
Blowback Dragon x2
Barrel Dragon x2

Spells x10
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Mystical Space Typhoon x1
Book Of Moon x1
Swords of Revealing Light x1
Swords of Concealing Light x1
United We Stand x1
Insect Barrier x2
Mage Power x1
Graceful Charity x1
Lightning Vortex x2

Traps x9
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Trap Hole x2
DNA Surgery x3
Gravity Bind x1
Call of The Haunted x1
Enchanted Javelin x2

Answer 1

First things off, I severely confused on why many of the cards in there are there at all. Take out both Barrel Dragons. Trust me they are too unreliable. There are very few good 2 sacrifice monsters. I see the Kinetic Soldier DNA combo. Not bad but if you plan on doing that i suggest you take out 1 Insect Barrier and and 1 DNA. Replace the enchanted with Wabuko/Negate attack/Sakeretsu armor/Threatening roar/Complusory Evacuation Device. Not bad overall but some cards need to be out of there.

Answer 2

looks ok but i dont see a theme in it and what the heck is DNA surgery in there for if ur using it with insect barrier that dont work there r better cards than those u need some traps that stop monster attacks sorry to be sore but this deck need work

Answer 3

that's gangsta foo u got that berrel drgon up
in er but u should get a gatling dragon thing its a fusion of barrel daragin and blowback

Answer 4

You have beatdown monsters (except bug and penguin), but you have M/Ts dedicated to stalling.

Pick one side or the other....

Answer 5

Good already, but you lack limited cards in your possession

Answer 6

I dont like it, I see no theme, but u never know, it could b good