Somtimes...
When you cry
no one sees your tears.
Sometimes...
When your in pain
no one sees you hurt
Sometimes...
When you are worried
no one sees your stress.
Sometimes...
When you are happy
no one sees your smile.
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2006-12-22 13:55:27 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Psychology
But FART just
One Time and
everybody nows
If your gonna say something mean or rude then dont answer
2006-12-22 13:57:55 · update #1
yes
2006-12-22 13:57:08 · answer #1 · answered by Lynda J 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
ok ..first if crying in front of me I will see your tears..maybe if your crying inside..and no one will see your tears..your hurting and I am sorry..you need a hug..and maybe a kiss on the cheek..as well..know what I need a hug as well..its been a crappy year..and I could use a good hug ..and a kiss on the cheek and some one to tell me it will get better...good luck..dont give up..later..hugs and kisses...it will be better tomarrow..
2006-12-22 14:01:26 · answer #2 · answered by Kingofreportedabuse 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
That is very good. Sounds like poems I write. Keep it up!
Krazy Libra
2006-12-22 13:57:54 · answer #3 · answered by krazy_libra_from_ac 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's VERY bad! No! J/K! It's good actually. You can write a little more though, to make it very good. Good poem!
2006-12-22 13:58:57 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
umm, u didnt put the copyright of the author, which means that you're kind of claiming it as ure own when it isnt...
2006-12-22 15:17:25 · answer #5 · answered by Bubble T 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
make sure you proof read it before sending it to a publisher.
2006-12-22 14:03:52 · answer #6 · answered by luna 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
waaaaaaaw what a sweet poem , i really like it
2006-12-22 14:01:56 · answer #7 · answered by micho 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
there is nothing to comment..keep it up my love...a good poem come from deep heart
2006-12-22 14:08:39 · answer #8 · answered by arithmancy_master 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
the last part kind of ruined it for me
2006-12-22 14:04:07 · answer #9 · answered by Jack B 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its very powerful, thats for sure. it can be depressing though, if you are sad. but i think its well written
2006-12-22 13:58:37 · answer #10 · answered by skateKad47 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋