I never saw you coming, I fell so hard.
You got me on your hook of love,
You reeled me in with your charm.
At first we were just friends,
But little did I know
You're the one that I could never let go.
You have given me so much,
You mean more than any words could ever say.
Although I write you many poems to express my love,
I still don't give you enough.
Right now this is all I can give,
This is everything I know to do,
And the reason I do it is I fell for you.
I do have a special gift for you.
It isn't much, but it's a start.
It doesn't cost you anything,
But it's worth a lot.
My dearest Angel, I give to you
The key to my heart,
Bought and paid for with your love.
I don't give it away very easily,
So hold it dear.
Giving it to you brings me no fear.
2006-12-22 12:25:30 · 8 answers · asked by Eraser 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
awwwww i loved it! she will be very happy. she is one lucky girl
2006-12-22 12:29:06 · answer #1 · answered by i am the dream u r the dreamer 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sweet, but you need rhythm. Sorry, i'm criticing it, but it has no rhythm, and i almost fell asleep the first few lines!
2006-12-22 12:31:55 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awww That's so sweet
2006-12-22 12:28:23 · answer #3 · answered by Lyrical Lie 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You have posted this already on this account,and on you other account under the name Unbreakable.
2006-12-22 12:55:24 · answer #4 · answered by Celebrity girl 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ok, let me tell you that you are one talented guy. That's heaps good. And I mean VERY good.
2006-12-22 12:28:23 · answer #5 · answered by Caity 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Awww, that is so sweet and I am sure she will love it!
2006-12-22 12:27:50 · answer #6 · answered by megatronbomb 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I love it. Absolutely love it.
2006-12-22 12:28:28 · answer #7 · answered by Marenight 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
that is beautiful!
2006-12-22 12:29:22 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋