when you kiss me
i feel like everything is okay
when you hold me
i always want to stay
when i see you
i fall in love all over again
when i'm with you
i can feel no pain
when i touch you
i see your hairs rise
i breathe you in
i tuck you in
no one can harm you
as long as i am beside you
i see no hate
my love for you is far too great
when you write me
i long to read
when you smile at me
i never want to leave
when i saw you
i couldn't believe my eyes
surely it was my imagination
surely it was a lie
no, you were there
a beauty like no other
an answer to my prayers
2006-12-22 11:54:01 · 15 answers · asked by Eraser 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Wow, that's so deep. Dude, that's heaps good!!! She'll definately love it, and if she doesn't, I will!!!
2006-12-22 11:58:08 · answer #1 · answered by Caity 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If she doesn't I'd be surprised.Obviously you put your full feelings for her into your writing. Any woman receiving a poem or other writing such as yours should be quite touched.
2006-12-22 12:03:02 · answer #2 · answered by tea cup 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yah
2006-12-22 11:55:56 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Absolutely! i would love it if a guy wrote me a poem, whether i like it or not.. its the thought that counts... and that is very romantic
2006-12-22 11:57:19 · answer #4 · answered by amwolf2 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes she will because its real cute and you put the effort into it and the meaning behind it is what matters most of all
2006-12-22 11:55:52 · answer #5 · answered by × 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes,please stop asking this.
2006-12-22 13:02:20 · answer #6 · answered by Celebrity girl 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats beautiful babe she will absolutely love it
2006-12-22 11:56:50 · answer #7 · answered by redneckwoodman 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, of course !!!
2006-12-22 11:58:21 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aww that is so sweet ! She will love it and frame it!
2006-12-22 11:56:47 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
She will love it
2006-12-22 11:55:15 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋