Hey, I wrote this song yesterday and, I think it's pretty good it sounds better with the music though. I would really appreciate some honest opinions about it thanks.
I Don't Wanna See You Cry
When your feeling alone in this world
with no one to hold, and be by your side.
When your meaning to hold your head up high
But all you can do is just sit and cry
Don't be afraid I'll be there for you
I'll be the friend that you need me to.
(Chorus)
You dont have to cry
You dont have to feel the hurt you feel inside
Just call out my name
I'll be there fatser than you can say.
Cause I don't wanna see you cry.
Don't you worry what other people say
Cause they won't be there in the end
But I will
Always
Be your everlasting friend
Don't be afraid I'll be there for you
I'll be the freind that you need me to.
(Repeat chorus)
I will always lift you up when your down
I will make sure you have no reason to frown.
(Repeat chorus 2x)
2006-12-22 08:38:55 · 9 answers · asked by Stunnas on got my stunnas on 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Thanks guys for all the positive feedback. And to the people who asked no I did not copy this song I wrote it myself.
2006-12-23 00:36:11 · update #1
Time to find yourself a producer. Good luck - you have talent.
2006-12-22 08:42:41 · answer #1 · answered by D N 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's beautiful. I can actually hear a melody in my head from reading the words. Good job.
2006-12-22 16:42:07 · answer #2 · answered by guitar4peace 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
sounds like a song i have heard did you copy?? anyways if you did write it great job it sounds beautiful. NIce!! Merry Christmas.
:-)(-:
2006-12-22 16:48:54 · answer #3 · answered by ~boy crazy~ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good, nice job!
2006-12-22 16:41:42 · answer #4 · answered by pitbull lover 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i like it you did a really go job
2006-12-22 16:56:13 · answer #5 · answered by Lil_Missy 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's a nice song .
2006-12-22 16:41:34 · answer #6 · answered by riddlemethis 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
GooD JOb !!! I mean it.
2006-12-22 16:43:06 · answer #7 · answered by Sugar 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
next x-factor series......here comes you!
2006-12-22 16:46:55 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
umm r u sure you wrote this?? i could have sworn ive heard a song JUST liek this.... well idk but IF you DID write it then kewl kewl, its good.
2006-12-22 16:41:14 · answer #9 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋