I'm thinking of calling it Butterfly...what do you think?
Don’t you see, I just wanna be free?
But I want you to come with me,
To see who you could really be.
You’re closed like the closet door, but in your eyes I see so much more
Then what you let out, oh
Chorus: I wanna fly away with you today
If only you would take my hand and let me lead the way.
Hey,
Fly and I wont ever let you go.
You need to know who you are inside
In your cocoon,
Butterfly.
You claim that you could never want anything else
But I see the need in your heart
You want to vent it all out
On somebody trustworthy
Well, that’s why you got me, oh
Chorus
Fly, fly, away
Fly, fly, away with you today
Fly, fly, never let you go
Butterfly.
2006-12-22 08:07:34 · 8 answers · asked by Butterfly 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Also, what do you think of this poem I wrote?
I hate the way you look at me,
and the way you make me smile,
The way you laugh when I say something funny could make me walk a mile.
I hate they way you talk to me,
and how I know you'd catch if I fall,
But I mostly hate the way don't hate you.
Not one bit.
Not at all.
2006-12-22 08:28:07 · update #1
I saw a poem a little like this on a page of someone I know.......it was on an icon...I used the same sort of mood and theme and all that, bu i completely changed the words. Sorry if it sounds like I'm copying something.
2006-12-22 08:41:07 · update #2
It's dedicated to this guy named Ian.....just a random little peice of info there,
2006-12-22 09:24:43 · update #3
omg freakin gwad i love it! you need an agent girly! that song is awsome. good luck with it!
2006-12-22 08:41:03 · answer #1 · answered by Shelby 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good start.
The poem sounds a lot like a poem I remember from the movie "10 Things I Hate About You".
2006-12-22 08:38:56 · answer #2 · answered by guitar4peace 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it but heres some advice if you want it to be a song u had better get it patented before someone takes it and why do u care if people like it or not if you feel good about it u should go for it!
2006-12-22 08:29:56 · answer #3 · answered by Katie Noble 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's pretty good. I also write song, but mine always end up with something that don't sound right. You should put it to music.
2006-12-22 08:10:39 · answer #4 · answered by ballachick010 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It`s really good
2006-12-22 08:10:30 · answer #5 · answered by E-V 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it you have some skill
2006-12-22 08:16:33 · answer #6 · answered by keokeid 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG i love itttttttt good luck girl ;);) its really gooooooooooooooddddddddddddd
2006-12-22 08:24:50 · answer #7 · answered by wtever 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
AWW !! THAT'S GREAT !! =]
2006-12-22 08:24:23 · answer #8 · answered by x0x0sara0x0x 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋