The sun is slowly fading
and the night is coming soon
Around the shadow's corner
I can feel the breeze blow through
With each passing moment
I am that much closer to you
Not a minute goes to waste
Nor does anything we do
Every day is like a blessing
each one better than the last
God must really be listening
for he sent you when I asked
Now I know what real love is
and I will cherish it forever
I promise to always be true
and only you will I treasure
2006-12-22 03:54:24 · 13 answers · asked by Eraser 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Did you write that?!
OMG, that's so adorable. I would love if my boyfriend wrote me a poem, knowing he took the time and effort just for me.
I'm sure she'll love it. =]
2006-12-22 03:57:31 · answer #1 · answered by xEasilyInfluenced 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes
2006-12-22 11:56:50 · answer #2 · answered by Ear 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
oh my god it's beautiful! did you write it?? cuz when i read it it was like i was falling inlove with you... lol! no but it's great! you're a great poet if you wrote it.... you sould without a doubt give it to her - it's so romantic! but watch out... if YOU didn't write, it's a bit of a knockout for girls to recieve poems from their boyfriends that they didn't even write you know! cuz we'll eventually find out! so it wouldn't be a good idea to give her that if it's the case... it would be like a 'i didn't have enough time to buy something, nor the money, so i googled "love poem" printed it and gave it to you' present... you know what i'm saying?
2006-12-22 12:00:44 · answer #3 · answered by Lux 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
'sniff sniff' Yes she will love it and she is a very lucky lady. Merry Christmas.
2006-12-22 11:57:13 · answer #4 · answered by Thumper 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a very sweet poem.
2006-12-22 13:04:27 · answer #5 · answered by Celebrity girl 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you poem was good..but there's need a little correction...if you plus another red rose maybe she would like it..
2006-12-22 12:01:41 · answer #6 · answered by FaY PeGgY 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In the right setting, Yup yup yup...
2006-12-22 11:57:17 · answer #7 · answered by boots&hank 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
*Sniff, sniff* That was really good, she is a lucky girl!
Wish i had someone writing me nice poetry!
2006-12-22 11:57:06 · answer #8 · answered by Fluffy Rover 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's very pretty. I'd like it, so she should. Good luck.
2006-12-22 12:02:05 · answer #9 · answered by ♥Gïrl¥♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey, man, that's really sweet! If I were gay, she'd have competition. lol.
2006-12-22 11:59:20 · answer #10 · answered by Masta Batang Dollar Billz 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋