-----
In your leaving, we would like to congratulate you on the wonderful job you have done. Your determination and loyalty *made you of a wonderful assistance* and your performance was most certainly to our satisfaction. It was pleasure to work with you.
2006-12-21 19:11:13 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
No.
First of all, you don't want to use two "wonderfuls" so close to one another. It's of bad form to not find a new adjective.
Secondly, "made you of a wonderful assistance" simply doesn't make sense. Try, "Your determination and loyalty were of great assistance..."
2006-12-21 19:15:09 · answer #1 · answered by Esma 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
WITH your leaving....
...your performance was most certainly to our satisfaction. Is the person an actor? This statement sounds stinted and like the person did a mediocre job.
2006-12-21 19:17:20 · answer #2 · answered by tichur 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sam sounds right to me
" were of great assistance"
2006-12-21 19:35:11 · answer #3 · answered by RWIZ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋