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The stars..the moon..the dark shadows cast upon your street thats is surrounded by broken street lamps...trash that blows in the gutters..the few that pass by?

2006-12-21 16:41:24 · 20 answers · asked by hunnysbeckers 2 in Entertainment & Music Polls & Surveys

Wide stretch tangerine skies
Brought snow to my doorstep
That morning as the heat sizzled on
The alarm clock awoke the silence
To days that became colder
And nights that grew older
As I trudged home
The crunch in my step
Brought each distance closer
The moonlight prancing by my side
Hail upon my shoulder
Icy traces of winter covered the sidewalks
Where strangers pass by
With their cold, ruddy faces
Each on their way to different places
The few that say hi.
my poem do u like it?

2006-12-21 16:48:50 · update #1

20 answers

for me not just the stars the moon is delightful its something you can look at thats shines all night and everytime i look at it theres always a smile on the moon :] i love it
merry christmas!

2006-12-21 16:44:53 · answer #1 · answered by beatbox 1 · 0 0

I like the way the chicago skyline looks at night. Like a bunch of scattered stars. I like the quiet too.

2006-12-22 00:44:42 · answer #2 · answered by Welcome, to the real world! 5 · 0 0

the coolness ,how the moon is out .the air has a chill and you feel like the darkness hides you. you can finally be free from the problems of the day.

2006-12-22 00:46:28 · answer #3 · answered by reno_tony_casino 5 · 0 0

Means the house is quiet because the kids are asleep and I can walk around in my underwear...did I say that out loud?

2006-12-22 00:47:41 · answer #4 · answered by Koozie 5 · 0 0

Everything is quiet. I am not overstimulated by all the noise and action. Things slow and sputter to a halt.

2006-12-22 00:44:35 · answer #5 · answered by tankgirl190 6 · 0 0

The complete silence
And better tv shows

2006-12-22 00:43:10 · answer #6 · answered by ♥ Ladylike ♥ 6 · 0 0

The sun being down. The moon shining, so on and so forth.

2006-12-22 00:42:48 · answer #7 · answered by Queen of the Royal Library 2 · 0 0

The peace and quiet and knowing that another day is over and sleep is not too far away ....

2006-12-22 00:43:59 · answer #8 · answered by Aussie Girl 3 · 0 0

Time to calm down and leave the day's worries behind...

2006-12-22 00:50:38 · answer #9 · answered by chanel_girl0 2 · 0 0

when i look out my window, its all black and orange.. i luv lookin out my window~ it looks soo pretty with the little forest in the background, and the wide open sky up above~

2006-12-22 00:44:05 · answer #10 · answered by :D 5 · 0 0

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